Ok. This week I'm going to post a song that I wrote a couple of months ago. I'm still working on the music for this one. I would love to hear any of you guys comments on this one.

I feel that I can't shake it,

your Negativity,

the bonds of hate I can't break'em,

when they take control of me,

I feel like I can't make it,

when I feel your touch againist my skin,

you're like the air I'm breathing,

can't help but..taking..you..in,



You're like a dose of Snake venom,

you're like a catchy little tune,

you're like the candy I've been craving,

Just hope I breakaway soon,

you're like a 1000ft. freefall,

you're like a pricless sunrise,

I'm falling faster by the moment,

But your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes....

Just hope I breakaway soon (x3)



I feel like tightrope walking,

on a building 10 stories,

I lose my balance and I'm falling,

my only hope is if you save me,

I can see you reach your hand out,

just in time to save the day,

but instead of coming to the rescue,

you just smile and pull..your..hand..away.



you're like a dose of snake venom,

you're like a catchy little tune,

you're like the candy I've been craving,

Just hope I breakaway soon,

you're like a 1000ft. freefall,

you're like a precious sunrise,

I'm falling faster by the moment,

but your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes,

Just hope I breakaway soon,(x3)



A siren's call is on your lips,

Sweet deception in your eyes,

you're the queen of the moment,

you're my suger, sweet demise,

Just hope I breakaway soon ...(x3
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Concrete is coming along pretty well. It going to take longer than I orginally thought to get everything organized but, it will be worth it.

Ok. This week I'm going to post a song that I wrote a couple of months ago. I'm still working on the music for this one. I would love to hear any of you guys comments on this one.

I feel that I can't shake it,

your Negativity,

the bonds of hate I can't break'em,

when they take control of me,

I feel like I can't make it,

when I feel your touch againist my skin,

you're like the air I'm breathing,

can't help but..taking..you..in,



You're like a dose of Snake venom,

you're like a catchy little tune,

you're like the candy I've been craving,

Just hope I breakaway soon,

you're like a 1000ft. freefall,

you're like a pricless sunrise,

I'm falling faster by the moment,

But your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes....

Just hope I breakaway soon (x3)



I feel like tightrope walking,

on a building 10 stories,

I lose my balance and I'm falling,

my only hope is if you save me,

I can see you reach your hand out,

just in time to save the day,

but instead of coming to the rescue,

you just smile and pull..your..hand..away.



you're like a dose of snake venom,

you're like a catchy little tune,

you're like the candy I've been craving,

Just hope I breakaway soon,

you're like a 1000ft. freefall,

you're like a precious sunrise,

I'm falling faster by the moment,

but your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes,

Just hope I breakaway soon,(x3)



A siren's call is on your lips,

Sweet deception in your eyes,

you're the queen of the moment,

you're my suger, sweet demise,

Just hope I breakaway soon ...(x3
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Concrete is coming along pretty well. It going to take longer than I orginally thought to get everything organized but, it will be worth it.