In English Comp II today our teacher came in with 2 dozen glazed donuts for the class. To justify this he had us group up in threes and write a poem about eating a donut. The catch: we couldn't use few common descriptions and we couldn't rhyme very much if at all. My group (well, just I mainly) came up with this:
You disgust me!
You ring of vile bloodstream poison...
Shit, I forgot the rest of it already, but that's the first two lines. Basically the poem was a contemptuous look at the donut in all its unhealthy glory.
This next week will be stacked with the English assignments, though. Wednesday, we have a poetry explication essay due, then on Thursday we have to write 3+ poems of our own, and then our "final" is an explication of those poems. AND THEN... jk. there is no "and then" after that.
So I was a little pitiful yesterday. Sue me; you'd probably do the same in my position. Don't think I'm some emo-ass pussy all the time because I happened to elaborate on it when I was updating this journal.
by the way, where are my Madball, Judge and Bold cds?
You disgust me!
You ring of vile bloodstream poison...
Shit, I forgot the rest of it already, but that's the first two lines. Basically the poem was a contemptuous look at the donut in all its unhealthy glory.
This next week will be stacked with the English assignments, though. Wednesday, we have a poetry explication essay due, then on Thursday we have to write 3+ poems of our own, and then our "final" is an explication of those poems. AND THEN... jk. there is no "and then" after that.
So I was a little pitiful yesterday. Sue me; you'd probably do the same in my position. Don't think I'm some emo-ass pussy all the time because I happened to elaborate on it when I was updating this journal.
by the way, where are my Madball, Judge and Bold cds?
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i think meeting up would be rad. and if you write a poem about me that sounds anything like the poem about the doughnut, i'll have to try my first jump front kick on a human.
just playing! but seriously, what did the poor sweet doughnut ever do to you?
wait. strike that. are you vegan? is that what you're trying to say?