okay - so I am single yet again, book is done and set to come out in about a month - had to get a ton of work done, I had blown off getting final editing done. But KKnow I'm back
here is a rough draft of something I just wrote 20 mins ago, for a woman I kissed for 4 hours and 22 minutes...
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megz:
Happy Belated Turkey Day...Hope things are looking up for you

belllla:
4:22? That's hot.
Very rough draft - let me know what you think
Night Light
There so many stars
Some where dark and some where light
I wished upon them
As did those to my left and those to my right
Is not darkness, only the absence of light
I feared nothing during those year
I find myself near forty
Afraid of the dark
Heavens were filled with...
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ginacherry:
Hi
Peace and Love

riotrocksface:
Wow, thats great! I love it!
riot.

riot.
Two new sniper poetry drafts - book is coming out in mid dec 2004
A.M.
Why was there no divine intervention?
Or did he send me to do his job
Could he be so cruel
To punish the wicked and innocent so badly
I thought all were his children
Yet he let me alone with them
To treat them like his enemy
Never showing mercy...
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karalynn:
Just popped by to wish you a good weekend. Happy Haunting. xoxo
josephene:
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!


very very rough draft - no edit - more dark sniper poetry
Speak Easy
As I see the words, bring you pain
Short and shallow
Will prolong the inevitable
Do not waste your breath
You have so precious few remaining
Perhaps you should have
Paid better attention
During your basic training
Do not fight
You have already lost
The sunlight fads
Simply go gently into...
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karalynn:
Wishing you a good week.

dumpling:
This is sad army poetry.
I like the dark stuff too.
I like the dark stuff too.
more dark stuff
Doc Holiday
Like a Dentist
Whose only tools are pliers and a hammer
I remove decaying teeth
And Health ones alike
I do not give fillings
Nor Caps
I may give you a root canal
But only for sport
Sometime I must extract a health tooth
If next to one with a problem
Lest it get infected or cause others to
You...
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karalynn:
Wishing you a good week Newark.
meanwhile:
i get my wisdom teeth pulled on friday

another very rough draft
Misogynistic Gentleman
Keeper of faith
Righter of wrong
Like a Misogynistic Gentleman
All that I am - is an oxy Moran
I fought for me life
Now struggle to survive
The sun is my best friend
Yet I dislike its company
Night is my enemy
But darkness I crave
I embrace that which offends
Keeping good at a safe distance
Sleep...
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thisplaceisdeath:
Wow, that's awesome.
tattednproud:
I was born in red bank NJ

very dark - first draft
nothing like sniper poetry
Zombie
I am the walking dead
Simply existing
I fought for my life
Now I live to die another day
Getting out of bed is an effort
Thought gladly I do
Sleep brings me no rest
Only abuse to my body and mind
Each day is a struggle
Every step has pain
No matter the joy...
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mislaid:
wow...that's amazing.
penguinscheme:
sweet^_^
another soft and sappy love poem, I have some great sniper stuff, I just wrote, but can't put it on line, since it must be orginal when published and it's coming out in nov in a few differnt journals and reviews
so here is another rough draft
Dizzy
A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying...
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so here is another rough draft
Dizzy
A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying...
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falias:
you have sweet writing
and i have really cool glasses
[Edited on Sep 09, 2004 11:52AM]

and i have really cool glasses

[Edited on Sep 09, 2004 11:52AM]
beautiful_hatred:
nice, very nice
Very very rough draft
Glass
I am merely sand
Heated to an extreme
Transferring my rawness
In the devils hearth
The work of a great craftsman
Twisted obscurely for many reasons
Function takes its place above form
My sweat is weakness leaving my body
I take many shapes
Fragile like glass vase
My usefulness is in emptiness
To hold water - the elixir of life...
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dropdeadred:
wow great poem

Okay - more of the soft stuff, have some very dark stuff I am working on, beacuase, who does not like sniper poetry
After Glow
As the sunlight kisses
Your glistening skin
While the whimsical
Wind dries the air
I watch you smile
As you struggle to awake
Your natural beauty
Keeps me awake
I moved a couch
Into the bedroom
To watch you sleep...
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sidney:
wow you really dig chicks with glasses.....me too!! Frenchie is my fav!!

ladymaze:
Nice poem!
Wow, you have a lot of friends. How did you find me? And what made you interested in requesting my friendship?
Wow, you have a lot of friends. How did you find me? And what made you interested in requesting my friendship?