very dark - first draft
nothing like sniper poetry
Zombie
I am the walking dead
Simply existing
I fought for my life
Now I live to die another day
Getting out of bed is an effort
Thought gladly I do
Sleep brings me no rest
Only abuse to my body and mind
Each day is a struggle
Every step has pain
No matter the joy...
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mislaid:
wow...that's amazing.
penguinscheme:
sweet^_^
another soft and sappy love poem, I have some great sniper stuff, I just wrote, but can't put it on line, since it must be orginal when published and it's coming out in nov in a few differnt journals and reviews
so here is another rough draft
Dizzy
A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying...
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so here is another rough draft
Dizzy
A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying...
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falias:
you have sweet writing
and i have really cool glasses
[Edited on Sep 09, 2004 11:52AM]
and i have really cool glasses
[Edited on Sep 09, 2004 11:52AM]
beautiful_hatred:
nice, very nice
Very very rough draft
Glass
I am merely sand
Heated to an extreme
Transferring my rawness
In the devils hearth
The work of a great craftsman
Twisted obscurely for many reasons
Function takes its place above form
My sweat is weakness leaving my body
I take many shapes
Fragile like glass vase
My usefulness is in emptiness
To hold water - the elixir of life...
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dropdeadred:
wow great poem
Okay - more of the soft stuff, have some very dark stuff I am working on, beacuase, who does not like sniper poetry
After Glow
As the sunlight kisses
Your glistening skin
While the whimsical
Wind dries the air
I watch you smile
As you struggle to awake
Your natural beauty
Keeps me awake
I moved a couch
Into the bedroom
To watch you sleep...
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sidney:
wow you really dig chicks with glasses.....me too!! Frenchie is my fav!!
ladymaze:
Nice poem!
Wow, you have a lot of friends. How did you find me? And what made you interested in requesting my friendship?
Wow, you have a lot of friends. How did you find me? And what made you interested in requesting my friendship?
Softer stuff
In music Fermata is to hold a note and not let go, to freeze time. Nicholson Baker, wrote a great book entitled "fermata" ( has another great on called "Vox")
Fermata
for Sarah
She lays softly silent
Seemingly without a care
Quietly content, with bed hair
Her beauty leaves me gasping for air
I watch her chest
As it rises and falls
Just...
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semicharmed:
i still have the boyfriend ...
And this friend is an old-new friend. Not for so long but we know a lot about each other ...
Want my glasses to model for you ? : )
And this friend is an old-new friend. Not for so long but we know a lot about each other ...
Want my glasses to model for you ? : )
majortomias:
cool poem.
as promised some darker stuff
Tool
He stands with his rifle
Nearly three feet away
Smoking with one hand in his pocket
What kind of Sentry is he
I swoop upon him from behind
With the greatest of easy
In a fluid motion I strike
Timing the insertion into the right side of his neck
Just as I cup his mouth and squeeze shut his...
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figmentation:
greetings and salutations...
creative_slacker:
I like your transitions in the first poem. The tool with the human tool, very nice metaphor. The second poem intrigues me... autobiographical perhapse? (Or am I prying)
Anyhow, dark, broody, pensive, very nice... keep writing.
Anyhow, dark, broody, pensive, very nice... keep writing.
okay some more love stuff, I have some very angry sniper, shoot people from a 1000meters stufbut first this
Thoughts of you
As slow jazz plays on the radio
Sitting reading on the couch
In the candles soft flame
Listening to the gentle rain on the windows edge
When I head to bed
Kissing my pillow good night
And hold it ever so tight
In...
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jayde__:
That was beautiful and touching.
So how are you doing?
So how are you doing?
nomadgirl:
That was ever so purty.
Okay some more soft and gentle stuff - I promise, I have just written some very very dark stuff and some sniper poetry, but until then
That of an angel
There is no beauty
Like that of an angel
No softness
That compares to her wings
Floating effortlessly
Evil dares not to dwell
Anyplace she goes
Even better, she barley knows
How her touch, heals...
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kesaresj:
You sent my a friend's request. I came to say hi and see who you are. I have really cool glasses.
bluechild:
awww
Abandoned
On a warm summer eve
With perfect weather
My reckless youth was abandoned
Not far from my childhood home
We ate pizza and searched in vain for corndogs
Playing thirty dollars worth of arcade games
Walking miles on the boardwalk
Awkwardly advancing with true romance
Over a decade before I lost my innocence
Twelve thousand miles away
In a unforgiving desert
In a land...
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On a warm summer eve
With perfect weather
My reckless youth was abandoned
Not far from my childhood home
We ate pizza and searched in vain for corndogs
Playing thirty dollars worth of arcade games
Walking miles on the boardwalk
Awkwardly advancing with true romance
Over a decade before I lost my innocence
Twelve thousand miles away
In a unforgiving desert
In a land...
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semicharmed:
hey there !
I've stopped writing for now, i feel as if i have nothing to get out, which is really good in some way ... don't you think ?
and i see as always your writing is beautiful
I've stopped writing for now, i feel as if i have nothing to get out, which is really good in some way ... don't you think ?
and i see as always your writing is beautiful
semicharmed:
The boyfriend is fine.
We're planning on going to Canada for a few weeks - but that's in the far future : )
What's with you ?
Found a hot girl with glasses ?
We're planning on going to Canada for a few weeks - but that's in the far future : )
What's with you ?
Found a hot girl with glasses ?
Okay - some more dark poetry - still looking for a girl with cool glasses, that I can see our unborn children in her eyes, short of that a woman with or without cool glasses to have a great deal of sex with over the long weekend ?
back to the dark draft, also from the upcoming book
Too many to count
Bound by the...
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n8tvegrl:
I nominate you for longest post ever... if not this one then one of your many others!
Hope all is well with you!
Hope all is well with you!
minibeanie:
With all your poetry, when do have time to do anything else....
This is the title poem of the book - you can start to piece them together to get a feel for it
War Cry
We painted our faces,
We cut off our Hair,
We lived like a noble nomad tribe,
We hunted in Packs
We took care of each other
We traveled light
We ate what we could
We called each other Brother
We prayed...
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adelle86561:
another beautiful piece - will i be able to get your book in sydney or anywhere online?
minibeanie:
If everyone could get their feelings out like you do we would all be a little happier.....
today's poem is
I had sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a whole lot of sex ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
first time since jan, 2004 and I made her cum about 15 times over a 12 hour period !!! swear to god !
I love sex ! more poetry later, no we are doing the dance of happy sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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minibeanie:
Congrats....Damn, 15 times huh....Where ya been all my life.....Write me a poem.....
daemontia:
15? i can't believe that lol