Tuesday Jul 27, 2004

0
yeah, i don't know how good this thing is. i think there may be a reason i started doing concrete poetry. let me know what you think. you don't have to be nice. biggrin

i knew him, as he stood

surrounded park benches, secreted

angled
impaired light, sharply

set by sparrows
naive and noisy

(afraid
of nightime)

there must be one way to find nourishment

a potential more benevolent
than this

buried craked neglected
when passed will and forget

captured land
of our fathers

stone box
breath translucent weary

sudden fortune lamentable
VIEW 6 of 6 COMMENTS
jonnytrrrash7:
i'd say this is good stuff........yes, SY was "good" not great, and i liked wolf eyes, mainly for the balls they have to produce sonic mayhem.......my friend said most of the people there were probably not old skoo youth heads, otherwise they would appreciate why sonic brought them along on tour..
kungfuvoodoo:
So, you wana join the guild?
(Generic greeting everyone gets)
Make ready your contributions and comments, and as astronauts in to the unknown, come what may and what not.
Welcome, feel free to butcher, rewrite, or complement your fellow writers work, as this is a get into it group, the main reason for it being private. We are all pros, can take it, and invite the commentary to improve or sharpen perceptions. Although we are definitely not here to attack the individual, the intent is to provide support to the truth seekers.
Infringing upon copyright is expressly discouraged; please respect the hard work of your fellow artists. We hope to inspire, contribute and know our rights are protected, as this is the primary reason this is a private group. No work is to leave the group without the express consent of the author. You will be removed from the group and face legal ramifications. We are here to be real.
All writing styles, subjects, and interests are as different as the individual and after we get going we may choose to require a submission to enter.
With that said.
Welcome aboard and feel free to contribute, comment, and contact me anytime.

-SSilver


Bring that bitch to the guild and i'll give it some love...
Hey, I like your likes, glad to meet ya', cheers.

More Blogs