So I've never actually wrote a poem but tonight I was particularly depressed and the drink or two did not help me. So I decided to take a stab at it...so if its not too awfully horrible, comments would be appreciated! Oh! And I am considering a new tattoo, one just under me breast, perhaps even on my nipples. Its something similar to Tex's. Go look at her pictures, I think the nipple and breast tattoos are amazing.
The time has finally come,
The pain too much to longer bear.
His face fills her thoughts,
The one she thought would always be there.
She locks the door silently,
Locks out all who care.
"What has happened to me,"
She asks the mirror with a solemn stare.
All the world sees her smile,
The smile that hides the lie.
The young beauty cries each night,
Re-living the sad good bye.
He left her alone and broke,
With broken heart and ready to die.
While her nights are filled with horrors,
Another takes his heart and eye.
But tonight will end the suffering,
With a blade that once was his.
Tears blind her sight,
One chance, no time to miss.
No more the golden haired angel,
Corrupted by his deep dark kiss.
Fallen from grace,
Death has come at last for the harlot of the dark prince
The time has finally come,
The pain too much to longer bear.
His face fills her thoughts,
The one she thought would always be there.
She locks the door silently,
Locks out all who care.
"What has happened to me,"
She asks the mirror with a solemn stare.
All the world sees her smile,
The smile that hides the lie.
The young beauty cries each night,
Re-living the sad good bye.
He left her alone and broke,
With broken heart and ready to die.
While her nights are filled with horrors,
Another takes his heart and eye.
But tonight will end the suffering,
With a blade that once was his.
Tears blind her sight,
One chance, no time to miss.
No more the golden haired angel,
Corrupted by his deep dark kiss.
Fallen from grace,
Death has come at last for the harlot of the dark prince
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mekanik:
All forms of writing are excellent ways of conveying the feelings of pain and depression. I like your poem. It flows very well and invokes a lot of emotion.
fallenfrmgrace:
Yay! I'm so glad people actually like it! My friends were like you're so emo.