Ok. This week I'm going to post a song that I wrote a couple of months ago. I'm still working on the music for this one. I would love to hear any of you guys comments on this one.
I feel that I can't shake it,
your Negativity,
the bonds of hate I can't break'em,
when they take control of me,
I feel like I can't make it,
when I feel your touch againist my skin,
you're like the air I'm breathing,
can't help but..taking..you..in,
You're like a dose of Snake venom,
you're like a catchy little tune,
you're like the candy I've been craving,
Just hope I breakaway soon,
you're like a 1000ft. freefall,
you're like a pricless sunrise,
I'm falling faster by the moment,
But your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes....
Just hope I breakaway soon (x3)
I feel like tightrope walking,
on a building 10 stories,
I lose my balance and I'm falling,
my only hope is if you save me,
I can see you reach your hand out,
just in time to save the day,
but instead of coming to the rescue,
you just smile and pull..your..hand..away.
you're like a dose of snake venom,
you're like a catchy little tune,
you're like the candy I've been craving,
Just hope I breakaway soon,
you're like a 1000ft. freefall,
you're like a precious sunrise,
I'm falling faster by the moment,
but your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes,
Just hope I breakaway soon,(x3)
A siren's call is on your lips,
Sweet deception in your eyes,
you're the queen of the moment,
you're my suger, sweet demise,
Just hope I breakaway soon ...(x3
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Concrete is coming along pretty well. It going to take longer than I orginally thought to get everything organized but, it will be worth it.
I feel that I can't shake it,
your Negativity,
the bonds of hate I can't break'em,
when they take control of me,
I feel like I can't make it,
when I feel your touch againist my skin,
you're like the air I'm breathing,
can't help but..taking..you..in,
You're like a dose of Snake venom,
you're like a catchy little tune,
you're like the candy I've been craving,
Just hope I breakaway soon,
you're like a 1000ft. freefall,
you're like a pricless sunrise,
I'm falling faster by the moment,
But your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes....
Just hope I breakaway soon (x3)
I feel like tightrope walking,
on a building 10 stories,
I lose my balance and I'm falling,
my only hope is if you save me,
I can see you reach your hand out,
just in time to save the day,
but instead of coming to the rescue,
you just smile and pull..your..hand..away.
you're like a dose of snake venom,
you're like a catchy little tune,
you're like the candy I've been craving,
Just hope I breakaway soon,
you're like a 1000ft. freefall,
you're like a precious sunrise,
I'm falling faster by the moment,
but your sunlight..hurts..my..eyes,
Just hope I breakaway soon,(x3)
A siren's call is on your lips,
Sweet deception in your eyes,
you're the queen of the moment,
you're my suger, sweet demise,
Just hope I breakaway soon ...(x3
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Concrete is coming along pretty well. It going to take longer than I orginally thought to get everything organized but, it will be worth it.
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squee_:
Cool lyrics. Have you written the music yet?
squee_:
Very cool. I hope we get to hear the finished product when it's done.