I love the set and I can't really anything worth criticizing. You looked very natural and very much at ease. I've heard from some that that's not easy at times, even for those who are used to posing, nude or not.

All in all, very well done,

I commented and looked out the thread on your early morning submit and I think everybody agrees was a hella fine production .won all the <3:S over loved it happy for you.

You had plenty of full frontal pictures, perhaps few rear views. You had some at the start of the set, include some in the middle and near the end.

It was a great debut set, and you are very pretty!

i thought the set was beautiful and you look amazing .... keep up the great work !!!!

I'm sorry I can't help you with any criticism. Honestly, I wouldn't change one thing about you.

One criticism: you're way too young for me. Some advice: don't add any more tattoos unless you're positive that you'll be happy with them for the rest of your life. Add only beautiful tattoos, like the one on your back. You have beautiful skin so be careful what you add.

My critique, you look so innocent and unsure in some of the photos, like with your over all body language and posing.

That can work to your advantage sometimes but I really would like to see you be more aggressive and confident. Regardless, the set was a marvelous debut. Tell more people about it via the groups and that way you can get more attention. You so deserve it. I see pink in your future, love. <3
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Before I give any kind of critique I have to say that what you do here is amazing and takes an enormous amount of confidence and courage and I really shouldn't have any right to critique when I'm not doing the same thing.

But that being said------ You are absolutely stunning beyond words in my opinion. You confidence in the photos you chose is evident but I have to agree with Pesky, you look so unsure in your expressions. You are beautiful and should be exudind that confidence and boldness that you obviously have in order to be posting sets. Your set was very tasteful and sexy and when you show those qualities, well sexy isn't even going to begin to define your sets. I'm sure of it. Without a doubt there will be pink in your future.

God Russia makes beautiful girls ^_^

I don't know what to tell you for criticism. I would have liked it if you did more posing in direct sunlight. You do it in the beginning of the set, but the rest of the set is mostly in shade. It wold be great to see how light plays off the figure. Great start though! You look amazing!

I would change nothing on your amazing body and would be horrified if you did. You are GORGEOUS the only thing that could make you more attractive is if you lived in Canada so I could flirt with you I will hope for many more pictures in a future set?

Happy Birthday Mellori!