hey guys...
i wrote a little somethin awhile ago and was wondering if someone out there will give me an honest opinion..
here goes..
" to find ones inner beauty
you must first look past the shell
to the heart that beats on the inside
and to the soul that burns like hell
the radiance that dwells is precious
and is beautiful in swell
but disturbe the inner rythm
and watch the chaos overwhelm."
i wrote a little somethin awhile ago and was wondering if someone out there will give me an honest opinion..
here goes..
" to find ones inner beauty
you must first look past the shell
to the heart that beats on the inside
and to the soul that burns like hell
the radiance that dwells is precious
and is beautiful in swell
but disturbe the inner rythm
and watch the chaos overwhelm."
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scorpio_:
morning, sunshine. Hope you're day is going well. Have a good one.
eternalkrista:
hey 420 my computer is going to be down for a couple days cause it broke. i sent a package today 3 day delivery time. i will miss you so much x0x0x0x0