I may not be ready for love
but oh, I do know who you are!
Every potential high has potential pain
and to you I was once your slave.
My beauty rest was in the clouds,
against you I lain in.
One plus one did not equal two,
because there was no equation.
X equals Y, it was just right.
We were the same because it was forbidden.
Tainted sleeves of hate were gone,
we looked into each other like the
invisible mirror on our walls.
We were blind, we were everything and all.
Doomsday, "so it goes..."
but oh, I do know who you are!
Every potential high has potential pain
and to you I was once your slave.
My beauty rest was in the clouds,
against you I lain in.
One plus one did not equal two,
because there was no equation.
X equals Y, it was just right.
We were the same because it was forbidden.
Tainted sleeves of hate were gone,
we looked into each other like the
invisible mirror on our walls.
We were blind, we were everything and all.
Doomsday, "so it goes..."
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although one recommendation since I'm used to getting and giving constructive criticism and all:
The "the" at the end of line 12 should move to the beginning of line 13 if you want to keep it flowing properly.