teh_asspope

you'll live, man. use yr wits and figure something out. the worst is to let those bastards win by giving up, so don't

Yeah... I know... just feeling like shit a bit.

Great writing; I enjoyed your work. Your may be asking a lot for edit... cause the punctuation is rough and the spacing is chunky which translates into a difficult read. Making us work for it I see.
You did caution the rough edit...
Otherwise the imagery and intrigue are compelling. I like a good action mystery frolic.
Now will you take the next step and clean it up or shall I?

AWWWWW!!!! dude, first of all, no hitting on attatched people, second of all, your friend used you?!? fuck that shit!

but you shouldn't feel dirty about it.

and yes, just keep waiting. but i recommend getting the fuck out of kenosha! you probably won't find anyone there to connect with, it's too small. even milwaukee is too small for me. it takes unique people longer to find a decent person.

i think id like to steal your journal entry and post it as mine... is that ok?
and now filthy doesn't BEGIN to describe how I feel. It really reaffirms my hunch that I should be a hermit. I only hurt others or myself when I try to connect... it is better to withdraw.

agreed.. . i tried that empty route for the first time and let myself get used like 2 months ago.. never ever again will i allow myself to do that. id rather be misserably alone than hate myself for trying to make up some sick rendition that i have in my head of how life is supposed to be..
and the end part about trying to connect? yeah i tried that again last night.. awful outcome to that scene.

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-SSilver

thanks for the suggestions of songs!

you don't want to be a man whore. seriously.

thanks...

Thant was the sweetest thing ever.