Saturday Nov 06, 2004

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Thank you suicide girls for all of your advice http://suicidegirls.com/boards/The+Girls/55521/

Perhaps this 9-5 chaz can get hooked up after all!
kungfuvoodoo:
Great writing; I enjoyed your work. Your may be asking a lot for edit... cause the punctuation is rough and the spacing is chunky which translates into a difficult read. Making us work for it I see. wink
You did caution the rough edit...
Otherwise the imagery and intrigue are compelling. I like a good action mystery frolic.
Now will you take the next step and clean it up or shall I?
wink

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