If you need somebody to proofread for grammatical and spelling errors let me know. I was editor for a newspaper for a few years and I actually enjoy doing it.
Holy shit! Your site is a thousand times better than before! It is so much more pleasing than your previous site.
I took the liberty to rewrite your opening page because there were a few errors. I'm sure that if you believe it reads better you can just cut-and-paste into your script. That'll save you some typing.
I AM ABOUT TO GRADUATE WITH AN ASSOCIATE OF SCIENCE DEGREE FROM BROOKS COLLEGE IN SUNNYVILLE, CA. MY OBJECTIVE IS TO OBTAIN AN INTERNSHIP OR JUNIOR LEVEL POSITION IN A GRAPHIC DESIGN AD AGENCY.
There were just a few areas that were a little off but it as sooooo much better than the previous site.
Under ABOUT:
I AM A DESIGNER LOOKING FOR A FUN AND CHALLENGING WORK ENVIRONMENT. I POSSESS TO YEARS OF GRAPHIC DESIGN EXPERIENCE IN FROM PRINT AND WEB DESIGN.
I HAVE THE ABILITY TO HANDLE MULTIPLE PROJECTS FROM CONCEPT TO PRODUCTION TO PRINT.
MY SCHOOLING HAS PREPARED ME TO HANDLE ALL TASKS SET BEFORE ME AND TO TACKLE ALL AREAS WITH AN ANALYTICAL MIND, WORKING THROUGH PROBLEMS AS THEY APPEAR WHILE MAKING SURE THAT ALL DEADLINES ARE MET OR EXCEEDED. I AM A WONDERFUL PERSON TO HAVE ON A DESIGN TEAM AND I MAKE SURE THAT ALL AREAS ARE ORGANIZED WHEN WORKING ON AN ASSIGNMENT.
Under SERVICES:
I CAN PROVIDE AND HAVE UTILIZED MY KNOWLEDGE IN DIFFERENT MEDIUMS INCLUDING MBUT NOT LIMITED TO:
*ART DIRECTION AND DESIGN
*PROJECT DEVELOPMENT FOR CORPORATE IDENTITIES
*LOGOS AND TRADEMARKS
*CORPORATE ANNUAL REPORTS
*BROCHURES, CATALOGUES, AND PROMOTIONS
*ANNOUNCEMENTS AND INVITATIONS
*SIGNAGE AND INSTALLATIONS
*POSTERS
*INTERACTIVE PROJECTS
If you can, provide links to different projects that you have worked on under each heading in the "SERVICES" area. That will provide possible employers with an easy way to see what your projects look like for each area.
Make your portfolio pictures bigger. They are very small and there is currently no way to make them bigger on your site.
Other than that I think it looks awesome. So much better.
Sup every im a newbie to this site.. so it owuld be koo is some ya can guid me around... just to let you guy sall now ahea dof time i am dislexic so excuse my bad grammer..
Ah. Welcome to SG. The best way to get to know more people, is to hit the Groups, linger around the Boards, and find people near you on the Hookup:Near page. Once you know some people, hang out in the irc chat with them. Enjoy your stay.
I took the liberty to rewrite your opening page because there were a few errors. I'm sure that if you believe it reads better you can just cut-and-paste into your script. That'll save you some typing.
I AM ABOUT TO GRADUATE WITH AN ASSOCIATE OF SCIENCE DEGREE FROM BROOKS COLLEGE IN SUNNYVILLE, CA. MY OBJECTIVE IS TO OBTAIN AN INTERNSHIP OR JUNIOR LEVEL POSITION IN A GRAPHIC DESIGN AD AGENCY.
There were just a few areas that were a little off but it as sooooo much better than the previous site.
Under ABOUT:
I AM A DESIGNER LOOKING FOR A FUN AND CHALLENGING WORK ENVIRONMENT. I POSSESS TO YEARS OF GRAPHIC DESIGN EXPERIENCE IN FROM PRINT AND WEB DESIGN.
I HAVE THE ABILITY TO HANDLE MULTIPLE PROJECTS FROM CONCEPT TO PRODUCTION TO PRINT.
MY SCHOOLING HAS PREPARED ME TO HANDLE ALL TASKS SET BEFORE ME AND TO TACKLE ALL AREAS WITH AN ANALYTICAL MIND, WORKING THROUGH PROBLEMS AS THEY APPEAR WHILE MAKING SURE THAT ALL DEADLINES ARE MET OR EXCEEDED. I AM A WONDERFUL PERSON TO HAVE ON A DESIGN TEAM AND I MAKE SURE THAT ALL AREAS ARE ORGANIZED WHEN WORKING ON AN ASSIGNMENT.
Under SERVICES:
I CAN PROVIDE AND HAVE UTILIZED MY KNOWLEDGE IN DIFFERENT MEDIUMS INCLUDING MBUT NOT LIMITED TO:
*ART DIRECTION AND DESIGN
*PROJECT DEVELOPMENT FOR CORPORATE IDENTITIES
*LOGOS AND TRADEMARKS
*CORPORATE ANNUAL REPORTS
*BROCHURES, CATALOGUES, AND PROMOTIONS
*ANNOUNCEMENTS AND INVITATIONS
*SIGNAGE AND INSTALLATIONS
*POSTERS
*INTERACTIVE PROJECTS
If you can, provide links to different projects that you have worked on under each heading in the "SERVICES" area. That will provide possible employers with an easy way to see what your projects look like for each area.
Make your portfolio pictures bigger. They are very small and there is currently no way to make them bigger on your site.
Other than that I think it looks awesome. So much better.