Yes, I can see them. I like color scheme of the photo with book, but its not the same as at the second colored photo. For set they should be the same, if color was changed during the shooting it could be hard to edit all the photos the way to make color and lighting look consistent throughout the set. And Im sure you know about the size, photos should be bigger than previews you posted. Anyway, the model is nice (who is she?) and Im glad you managed to shoot a set for SG finally, hope for the same luck for me soon.
It's better here now. =)