Ok, here's something I bet you didn't know: I write! But, I don't know if it's any good or not...
So, you tell me. Here is the last thing I wrote. (That I feel is worth posting.):
"She Brings The Rain"
She brings the rain
to wash away my tears.
Accompanied by
a heavy breeze
to take my breath away.
Her laughter holds
a certain thunder.
While her eyes shine with
sparks of lightning.
My doubt finds it hard to stay.
Clouds pass over
as she touches my skin.
Her passion then floods
my heart's structure.
I am drowning the best way.
She brings the rain
to wash away my fears.
She's, in every sense,
a perfect storm
to help me see the light of day.
08/30/'10
P.S. (If enough people like this, maybe I'll post more...)
So, you tell me. Here is the last thing I wrote. (That I feel is worth posting.):
"She Brings The Rain"
She brings the rain
to wash away my tears.
Accompanied by
a heavy breeze
to take my breath away.
Her laughter holds
a certain thunder.
While her eyes shine with
sparks of lightning.
My doubt finds it hard to stay.
Clouds pass over
as she touches my skin.
Her passion then floods
my heart's structure.
I am drowning the best way.
She brings the rain
to wash away my fears.
She's, in every sense,
a perfect storm
to help me see the light of day.
08/30/'10
P.S. (If enough people like this, maybe I'll post more...)
thanks for the add