Next song in the acoustic series is up on YouTube. Check out the stripped back version of my song, 28 Days here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UNtndm3m3so
tedbedlam:
I really like the irony involved in the "longest month of the year" as well as the title itself. You should try to ride a little more with that if you can. Cliches work (that's why they become cliches) but i personally don't see much original spin on a classic cliche in this case. Use contradiction and humor to your advantage rather than simple sentiment; just involve the sentiment in the overall theme or create a more direct story/timeline regarding the relationship between the month and the lady story possibly ala "Every Day I Write the Book" sort of thing. But as always, death to critics when the art is how it's supposed to be. I'm just a huge fan of punchlines, puns and voltas so I look for them in practically everything.