I'm in a couple of the poetry groups and I've already posted this in Urban Poetry Cafe... but I thought it's still worth posting to my profile... hope you enjoy it 
Again, please feel free to provide feedback!
Don't see beauty
NO I see right through me
This pile of flesh before your eyes
Inner beauty? Don't think so... it's definitely no surprise
You don't...
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Again, please feel free to provide feedback!
Don't see beauty
NO I see right through me
This pile of flesh before your eyes
Inner beauty? Don't think so... it's definitely no surprise
You don't...
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mile1423:
Hey new friend! I really love your poem! I used to write a little bit myself...haven't been lately, but I think it would be good for me to start again...it's so therapeutic
I really love your poem! I used to write a little bit myself...haven't been lately, but I think it would be good for me to start again...it's so therapeutic
shpeecialz:
Thanks new friend I agree, you should start again, especially if you find it therapeutic... I don't know what I would do without my writing sessions! Let me know when you post something
I agree, you should start again, especially if you find it therapeutic... I don't know what I would do without my writing sessions! Let me know when you post something I have eight hand written pages of emotion poured onto a notepad from one night of mad scientist-creativity and this is all I have edited so far. Please feel free to comment as I am very eager to get feedback
10/9/2009: A four page rant of emotion including loss of control. Later creating a calm of the storm
(PAUSE 2,3) and adding understanding.
On a...
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10/9/2009: A four page rant of emotion including loss of control. Later creating a calm of the storm
(PAUSE 2,3) and adding understanding.
On a...
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zombia:
thanks for the friend request
shpeecialz:
No, thank you beautiful
Mesmerized by your mind
...wish I could just look inside
and see me and you
or at least your version
and while it could be a perversion
I believe it's true
Not even GOD himself can unglue
the obscenities and madness
and altogether sadness
yet we always get past this
and again I see it's true
forever me and you
No matter how hard
the...
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...wish I could just look inside
and see me and you
or at least your version
and while it could be a perversion
I believe it's true
Not even GOD himself can unglue
the obscenities and madness
and altogether sadness
yet we always get past this
and again I see it's true
forever me and you
No matter how hard
the...
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Reality VS Existence....?
My reality is quite fuzzy at this point
...unsure of what realm I'm within
existence... what is it?
cani t be found just anywhere?
I yearn to be existent
...but unsure if I'm prepared
The funny part is I said this
and all they did was stare
Little did they notice
...that you can find it anywhere
and little did they know...
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My reality is quite fuzzy at this point
...unsure of what realm I'm within
existence... what is it?
cani t be found just anywhere?
I yearn to be existent
...but unsure if I'm prepared
The funny part is I said this
and all they did was stare
Little did they notice
...that you can find it anywhere
and little did they know...
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Constant memories through this brain
Oh if I could only abstain
running faster and faster
....thoughts of here, now, after.
What will become of this....
...deep twirling abyss?
as the thoughts keep trickling
keep dripping down
You say I'm always constantly down
but it won't stop
like I'm stuck here forever
within this deep, dark soul
...no help to control
what's travling within
Trapped in...
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Oh if I could only abstain
running faster and faster
....thoughts of here, now, after.
What will become of this....
...deep twirling abyss?
as the thoughts keep trickling
keep dripping down
You say I'm always constantly down
but it won't stop
like I'm stuck here forever
within this deep, dark soul
...no help to control
what's travling within
Trapped in...
Read More