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I’d love some critical feedback on my latest set “bombshell”! What could be improved? Any advise? I’m still on the hunt for that SOTD title so any help is welcome

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jasminenl:
I think Juanda hits the nail on the head: almost 60 pics in your last set, and a lot them are interchangeable for each other, which makes it rather 'flat'. If you'd ask me, I'd say: [1.] Add more variety within a set. This is mainly a task for the photograppher. Not wanting to sound harsh or rude, just trying to help here, but consider asking a different photographer, who has a bit more creativity and will take more 'steamy' shots, including detailed shots as well (which has already been mentioned by other people here). You could also help the photographer with getting more variety, e.g. by getting off that couch. [2.] Kill your darlings; less is more. If you don't have much variety within a set, then make sure to cut down your set to what you truly consider are the 30 best pics. I truly believe 'Bombshell' would have been at least as strong as it currently is with only half the number of pics. [3.] Most important advice: get inspired. Look at other sets. Of course, this will also be a matter of personal taste, but gather a collection of the best pics of different sets and try to 'copy' them. This way, you and your photographer will have a plan and are not just doing 'something': show him that "this is what you want and expect from him". I believe that if you would gather 20 to 30 pics of what you consider great sets (one of my personal faves e.g. is Zowie's 'Rebirth N Thrust Waves' set; such a diverse, erotic and steamy set!), and you would create a new set inspired by those pics, you should be able to get a SOTD really soon. You're already a great model, so you're almost there, if you'd ask me. Hope this helps! Good luck!
boulderchild:
I know this is digging up the past but I just found it so hear goes.  For me I loved the themed sets that used to be on here like love potion by binx or the set with the two girls making cupcakes. Rather than looking like a playboy pictorial they told a story that was entertaining and beautiful at the same time. Your sets are great and you are very lovely. Good luck with the new set!!  I liked it this morning.
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