Sunday Jan 31, 2010

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Alright, here's that poem I wrote the other day. Enjoy:

I burn for you,
all but entirely,
so much so that my vision
narrows to only encompass your form,
and my mind's only logic
exists within your aspect.

That my blood boils to
know your every curve
That these hands ache,
smolder
for want to know your skin.

No drink can quench this longing,
For every sip simply fuels it more
blisters me deeper,
to this feverish pitch.
My heart,
this smoking ember,
can only know peace within your arms,
and this fire,
can only be extinguished
in the cool satisfaction of your embrace.

I think it needs a little reworking...

your thoughts? smile
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coccinelle:
but if you translate it into czech then you could not see if its what you want to say with that poem frown
akasha823:
Aww, thank you. That is a good way to look at things. I'll be moving closer to Shreveport, LA really but still in TX. Life there is so much more relaxed. I don't want to move there and have the same stresses that I do here. It would defeat my purpose for moving there in the first place. smile

Cali is great- weather rocks and the scenery is breathtaking (on a smog-free day of course biggrin ). I love the ocean and being able to go to it whenever I need to clear my head is my favorite part of being here. You gotta come visit sometime!

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