this is a poem that i wrote recently about stuff that went on with me and a girl. just thought id share it and see what yall think
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Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Tear my heart up
And let it rust
Tried to hold on
But you left me
Sat alone
Waste away
Remedy to cure
Pain for passion
Told you how I feel
But still no reaction
Throw in my face
The love I have for you
Losing the race
That cant be won
Ive been afraid
Of the inevitable
No feelings earned
No feelings returned
Your beauty transcends
But nothing defends
My pain and fears
All the thoughts of you
And nights of endless tears
Tell me those werent
Wasted and discarded
Pictures and memories fade
Inhale and exhale
Youve taken my breath away
No turning back
From where weve been
And where we are
Marked and scarred
Branded by your touch
I cant escape you
Leave me to die in your heart
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Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Tear my heart up
And let it rust
Tried to hold on
But you left me
Sat alone
Waste away
Remedy to cure
Pain for passion
Told you how I feel
But still no reaction
Throw in my face
The love I have for you
Losing the race
That cant be won
Ive been afraid
Of the inevitable
No feelings earned
No feelings returned
Your beauty transcends
But nothing defends
My pain and fears
All the thoughts of you
And nights of endless tears
Tell me those werent
Wasted and discarded
Pictures and memories fade
Inhale and exhale
Youve taken my breath away
No turning back
From where weve been
And where we are
Marked and scarred
Branded by your touch
I cant escape you
Leave me to die in your heart
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numbfusion:
ya i know i need a new entry. wish you could come and be with me ChamberMADE, unfortunately your still with ur husband and stuff. do whats best for the baby.
yaya:
hey there sweety...that was something nice...wow...*sighs* now u just made me sad
jk
