would it be better to fly
a sharp descent down
fracturing bones and
confirming lies
it could be better to cut
soaking in water
opening up pores
and floating
maybe a loud blow
to a temple
round cold metal
made hot by physics
counting out pills
making sure it's enough
feeling cold and sleeping
without fear of waking
the fear is being
not being nothing
selfish or selflessness
the line blurs between them
a sharp descent down
fracturing bones and
confirming lies
it could be better to cut
soaking in water
opening up pores
and floating
maybe a loud blow
to a temple
round cold metal
made hot by physics
counting out pills
making sure it's enough
feeling cold and sleeping
without fear of waking
the fear is being
not being nothing
selfish or selflessness
the line blurs between them
http://www.geocities.com/Paris/LeftBank/4027/panther.html
i like the way you work out the duality - the way you send it out the door.
i like the way temple / metal /physics play together.
i like the intro too.
i need to read back through your archives and find more.