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just thought i'd say goodbye..i'll be grey soon, as if any of you care..
joyrider:
i do. you should give me your email address.
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You have an entrancing kiss~ the kind that leavesyour partner bedazzled and
joyrider:
this might eventually be a poem. it happened when i was in a hurry and couldn't write. i made a note instead.

*augery*
supermarket cellophane hearts
slick-guts
fierce
head smoke fingerpoke/explore
what do you find?
where is your future?
slippery chicken gore/insides
or clean luminous obscure like smoke
perfumed past
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we're so cool yeah yeah
yeah we're so cool cool
we're so cool yeah yeah
fuck you too
cool schmool!

i don't wanna sit around and talk about the wipers
weren't those the good old days?
i don't wanna wonder if you're gonna say hello
i don't wanna wonder if you're gonna walk away
i don't wanna hear how many friends you have
i don't...
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we're so cool yeah yeah
yeah we're so cool cool
we're so cool yeah yeah
fuck you too
cool schmool!

i don't wanna sit around and talk about the wipers
weren't those the good old days?
i don't wanna wonder if you're gonna say hello
i don't wanna wonder if you're gonna walk away
i don't wanna hear how many friends you have
i don't...
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It's a sestina...if you don't know what one is check
this out.

As I lay out
My hands turned yellow,
Shaking violently
Like the words I signed
To a sheet of paper
I couldn't read.

The clock I couldn't read
Because my mind was out.
Before words on paper
Were romantic but soon were yellowed.
It was a sign
To treat myself less violently.

The...
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seaniefresh:
I've missed you kiss
joyrider:
sestina would be a good name for a soul calibur character.

christ, that's a tough form. i sweat blood over sonnets.
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would it be better to fly
a sharp descent down
fracturing bones and
confirming lies

it could be better to cut
soaking in water
opening up pores
and floating

maybe a loud blow
to a temple
round cold metal
made hot by physics

counting out pills
making sure it's enough
feeling cold and sleeping
without fear of waking

the fear is being
not being nothing...
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gallas13:
you should read some rainer maria rilke

http://www.geocities.com/Paris/LeftBank/4027/panther.html
joyrider:

i like the way you work out the duality - the way you send it out the door.

i like the way temple / metal /physics play together.

i like the intro too.

i need to read back through your archives and find more.
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i'm about to hop into my big bathtub and i just thought maybe i should post. i went to a cosi party last night. it was ok. i didn't drink because i had to work at 10 this morning. i am so sleepy. ok. well what else. yeah rumors are now flying about me and this kid jeff at work just because i sat on...
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racer_x:
go to party tonite
burstandbloom:
thanks for your comments on

The unfair practice of
catching foul balls.


i worte it to be more prose like more the form of a flash fiction piece
and that is why it doesnt have many breaks

plus
it looks a bit different on the post
the spacing is different than i have it

but i definitely try to think about line breaks
and dont think enough writers do

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i work at cosi. i can make you a sandwich but i can't tell you what's on it. it's a secret/ shhhhh. they get their mushrooms from rittenhouse market. martha stweart was found guilty so i watch brini maxwell instead. i should go eat. if i do i might make more sense.
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heartstostars:
Thank you for your compliments, sweetheart. And I want to say-you have awesome taste in music.

xoxo
me
racer_x:
smile Hiya!
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i was plunged into a world that i'm not sure i wish to return to on saturday. "what was this strange place that natalie has gone?" you may be asking yourself. it was UberCon. Yes the con for gammers and other nreds of that persausion (did i spell that right?). i am a nerd, but only in the horror film sense. i know nothing of...
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joyrider:
thanks for the feedback in the poetry group. usually i don't get a response. maybe i should make more references to my black soul or blood tears or something.

i liked your rain poem. it's too cold to rain here now. your poem is my surrogate.

*cons are bad news. i avoid them.
gaambit:
Nice, not enough people that like The Who. They're having a Who Tribute CD release party at the Khyber in April...should be cool.
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i am diseased
vanished out from under
everything i hoped for
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joyrider:
i never answered your question.

you mentioned the poem a few entries ago - the one your instructor really liked.
desmobile:
hope you'll be born again...!!!
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ugh i'm tired for no reason again. i need to stop sleeping on the psuedo bed made from a folded up futon mattress and a real mattress. ugh. don't ask. i need a job! someone give one to me. i'm going to hard rock tommorrow. someone told me they were hiring. i think maybe i'll nap. or play more spider solitaire and look at horror...
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joyrider:
my futon was a lumbar-grinding torture device. it ended up at goodwill when i left portland. i couldn't bring myself to give it to any friends.

score +1 for the sith.
seaniefresh:
A Haiku for my friends...

I lost my phone
You can call Sean at work
Taxi cabs eat phones

215-972-0783