another soft and sappy love poem, I have some great sniper stuff, I just wrote, but can't put it on line, since it must be orginal when published and it's coming out in nov in a few differnt journals and reviews
so here is another rough draft
Dizzy
A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying me
Almost as they are her orchestra
Full of energy - Radiant
She warms my soul,
When I seem, light years away
Or inches apart
Bursting with power and energy
As the purest beauty accompanies me
A perfect night
Tanglewood in its full glory
A gentle wind hums
The melodies of love
With a swift, but slow comforting pace
Romance fills the mid summers air
Lovers hold hands
And express themselves with a smile
Hearts beat as one
To the rhythm of the Symphony
Time stands still
Then with great sorrow
This magical moments passes
But will never fade from my memoir
so here is another rough draft
Dizzy
A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying me
Almost as they are her orchestra
Full of energy - Radiant
She warms my soul,
When I seem, light years away
Or inches apart
Bursting with power and energy
As the purest beauty accompanies me
A perfect night
Tanglewood in its full glory
A gentle wind hums
The melodies of love
With a swift, but slow comforting pace
Romance fills the mid summers air
Lovers hold hands
And express themselves with a smile
Hearts beat as one
To the rhythm of the Symphony
Time stands still
Then with great sorrow
This magical moments passes
But will never fade from my memoir
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and i have really cool glasses
[Edited on Sep 09, 2004 11:52AM]