navysameri2003

Hello everyone, It has been a while since I have written one of these. I found a poem I wrote a while back I would love to get some opinions on it. So send me some feed back.

The Girl I Love

You know you are beautiful
But I can't see you.
I can only imagine,
Your eyes,
Your lips,
Your laugh,
Your smile,
Your love.
If we could only be together one more time.
If I could have
Your eyes,
Your lips,
Your laugh,
Your smile,
Your love one more time
I could live in heaven forever.
If I could only see how beautiful you are.