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emmett was waiting ever so patiently for me. ever so patiently. he jumped straight to my lap when i sat down.
so, i wrote this story. it's about playing catch. more than one old girlfriend and i used to go out on sunny days to throw a baseball around. i sent it to a friend of mine. he read it, and said it sounded like a strange thing for a couple to do, this ritual of playing catch. he was shocked when i told him i've done it with many a girl with whom i was involved
is it odd? do you think?
i rewrote the final sentence of the baseball paragraph so as not to end a sentence with a preposition. odder still?
emmett was waiting ever so patiently for me. ever so patiently. he jumped straight to my lap when i sat down.
so, i wrote this story. it's about playing catch. more than one old girlfriend and i used to go out on sunny days to throw a baseball around. i sent it to a friend of mine. he read it, and said it sounded like a strange thing for a couple to do, this ritual of playing catch. he was shocked when i told him i've done it with many a girl with whom i was involved
is it odd? do you think?
i rewrote the final sentence of the baseball paragraph so as not to end a sentence with a preposition. odder still?
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/geek.