hello, friends!
well, you guys asked to see some of the stuff i've written. here is the first segment of a long piece of non-fiction i've been writing over the last year as a side-project.
You and the Others Before You
part one: "make-up"
These are the secrets I dont tell.
When I see her at a bar, I act cool. Cool on one level in that I am friendly. I ask about her boyfriend, who is a friend of mine. I ask things like, Hows your night going? These are common social pleasantries handed out like a spare cigarette to a stranger.
I act cool on another level in that I always look much better than her. I straighten my hair and wear sparkly frosted pink on my lips. Hot pink eye shadow. A jean jacket with a sexy rock n roll tee underneath. I look around a lot and appear interested in a friend-shaped hole across the bar. There is no one there but I wave.
This shows her how much I dont care.
I kiss you so she knows we are in love. It is one of the few times I feel fake with you.
Periodically I go to the bathroom. When there is no one behind me in line, I have a little extra time to waste in there. I look in the mirror.
I point at my reflection and pretend that it is her. I say, Bitch!
Whore!
Boyfriend-fucker!
I ask, Do you know what youve done to my life, bitch?
I answer, I cant even go out in this town anymore!
Shes everywhere.
My lip twitches and I make an Elvis face.
Reapply lipstick.
Walking back to the bar, I see you guys are chumming it up. Laughing over a shared joke is what it looks like to me. I sit down beside you and say, You just fucked up.
I sleep with pajamas on that night. I want your body to touch mine just like you do but I will not allow you the pleasure. You tell me its been six months since it happened. You tell me that she means nothing and I mean everything. You tell me youve tried to make it up to me. I know its true, my love, I do.
But I cant stop imagining you, leaning against a sink, and her, with her leg hiked up, and you fucking her, and making that face, and grabbing her tits and loving it. I know it was brief, brief as the moment Ive seen in a photograph when water drops into water and a tiny sphere of liquid bounces into the air. The photograph, however, is permanent.
When I lie and say its over you cry. I look around a lot and appear bored. No make-up this time, no pink glossjust carefully applied false dignity and cruelty. I stare at a show-shaped hole on the television and appear interested.
This shows you how much I care.
well, you guys asked to see some of the stuff i've written. here is the first segment of a long piece of non-fiction i've been writing over the last year as a side-project.
You and the Others Before You
part one: "make-up"
These are the secrets I dont tell.
When I see her at a bar, I act cool. Cool on one level in that I am friendly. I ask about her boyfriend, who is a friend of mine. I ask things like, Hows your night going? These are common social pleasantries handed out like a spare cigarette to a stranger.
I act cool on another level in that I always look much better than her. I straighten my hair and wear sparkly frosted pink on my lips. Hot pink eye shadow. A jean jacket with a sexy rock n roll tee underneath. I look around a lot and appear interested in a friend-shaped hole across the bar. There is no one there but I wave.
This shows her how much I dont care.
I kiss you so she knows we are in love. It is one of the few times I feel fake with you.
Periodically I go to the bathroom. When there is no one behind me in line, I have a little extra time to waste in there. I look in the mirror.
I point at my reflection and pretend that it is her. I say, Bitch!
Whore!
Boyfriend-fucker!
I ask, Do you know what youve done to my life, bitch?
I answer, I cant even go out in this town anymore!
Shes everywhere.
My lip twitches and I make an Elvis face.
Reapply lipstick.
Walking back to the bar, I see you guys are chumming it up. Laughing over a shared joke is what it looks like to me. I sit down beside you and say, You just fucked up.
I sleep with pajamas on that night. I want your body to touch mine just like you do but I will not allow you the pleasure. You tell me its been six months since it happened. You tell me that she means nothing and I mean everything. You tell me youve tried to make it up to me. I know its true, my love, I do.
But I cant stop imagining you, leaning against a sink, and her, with her leg hiked up, and you fucking her, and making that face, and grabbing her tits and loving it. I know it was brief, brief as the moment Ive seen in a photograph when water drops into water and a tiny sphere of liquid bounces into the air. The photograph, however, is permanent.
When I lie and say its over you cry. I look around a lot and appear bored. No make-up this time, no pink glossjust carefully applied false dignity and cruelty. I stare at a show-shaped hole on the television and appear interested.
This shows you how much I care.
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mckenzie:
Thanxs for making me feel alot better, but now I just need to be very causious about SG around my house..... 
eccentric:
hazzah! for almost SG's writing! i really dig it when people post creative works on here! ps. thanks for the SG hopefulls encouragment post.