bad poetry at 1:00AM...
i'm not much of a poet. i'm more of a stream of consciousness, reflective writer...but i did write this poem and i kind of like it...even though it rhymes...i think these words would be good lyrics.
...clearly bitter..by jolene s.
when it's all about you
i see you smiling so hard
there's light in your eyes
when it's all about you...
when it's all about you
all is right with the world
everything is good...
when it's all about you
when it's all about you
each detail counts...
each thought has meaning
when it's all about you
when it's all about you
when it's not about me
your words are so clear
and it's easy to see
that our friendship was false
and now i am free...
sigh...
i'm a sleepy suicide girl wanna-be
good night...sweet dreams
i'm not much of a poet. i'm more of a stream of consciousness, reflective writer...but i did write this poem and i kind of like it...even though it rhymes...i think these words would be good lyrics.
...clearly bitter..by jolene s.
when it's all about you
i see you smiling so hard
there's light in your eyes
when it's all about you...
when it's all about you
all is right with the world
everything is good...
when it's all about you
when it's all about you
each detail counts...
each thought has meaning
when it's all about you
when it's all about you
when it's not about me
your words are so clear
and it's easy to see
that our friendship was false
and now i am free...
sigh...
i'm a sleepy suicide girl wanna-be
good night...sweet dreams
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I felt dumb asking that question about OHGR. I really dig their sound a lot. Ripped the music first then bought the cd and listen to it over and over.
Your pictures rock! With that look you won't be a wanabe Suicide girl for long!