I'm writing today. I'm up to Chapter 3 of my new novel. The skeleton is complete and I like how this one is developing.
Here's a taste!
Ollie pressed her hand into her bruise and tried desperately to remember. There was an impact. Something wooden? Her mouth began to water and her heartbeat quickened.
'Somebody hit me.'
She felt this to be true as much as her name was Ollie. Not because she thought it but because she felt it. Like a cat knows how to hunt and a mouse knows how to hide. She was Ollie, and someone was hunting her.
Here's a taste!
Ollie pressed her hand into her bruise and tried desperately to remember. There was an impact. Something wooden? Her mouth began to water and her heartbeat quickened.
'Somebody hit me.'
She felt this to be true as much as her name was Ollie. Not because she thought it but because she felt it. Like a cat knows how to hunt and a mouse knows how to hide. She was Ollie, and someone was hunting her.
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