jessiska

The only non-photographic criticism is have for you is that you seemed bored and/or pissed off about the whole thing. I think its a great first effort, but try to have more fun with it. Just my opinion...hope it helps.

You haven't chosen a really flattering angle, having the camera so low and looking up at you like that, you could use a lens thats slightly longer than standard something over 50mm. Keep trying, its always difficult photographing yourself.
I use a camera that is tethered to my laptop so that I can fire the shutter and see every shot as its taken.