I see a lot of sets where it is just the girl's face in every shot. They are full body shots, with no variety. Sets that get bought in my opinion have a variety of shots but MOST IMPORTANTLY TELL A STORY! i cannot stress that enough. Sets are supposed to have a theme, with a goal in the beginning setting up the scene and a variety of shots that show the journey through the set to come to it's conclusion.
If you look at the best of SG sets, @sinnah is the one that always comes to mind. Her sets have a variety of shots, full body, close up, medium, and CUTAWAY. no sets have cutaway shots anymore.
Also being in and out of focus is something I haven't seen in awhile. Sets are supposed to have a variety of shots that don't show your face in every pic. Where is the focus on your sleeve? where is the focus on the expression of your face in a close-up? I know your nude and have tattoos, but that isn't the reason your set gets bought. Convey a message, be artistic. This isn't just a photoshoot to model, it's nude art photography in my opinion.
/endrant