Just checked out your set and loved it.

okay. you look GREAT!!! and i love your makeup in the set!!
the only thing is that the photography doesn't do you justice.
you have really great poses, etc...
my advice is just to check out the "sets of the day" and try to get that kind of style with the photography!
it looks like the room you are shooting in was dark/didn't have good lighting so there are some crazy harsh shadows going on with the flash.
the clutter in the background has to go, and the pics were blurry (comparatively speaking to the other sets that usually get accepted as "set of the day"!)... try changing the settings on the camera, or get a new camera, so the quality of the pics is *crisper*.
i think it just needs some photoshopping.
NOT on you, you look beautiful!
just... you know, to make the contrast of colors stand out so everything isn't so "all the same" looking.
but yeah.
that's all just technical stuff.
fix that, and you will go pink for sure!
you are lovely!