hannelore

I want to be slapped, hurt, punished, controlled.
Anything to show me I'm not in control, conquered.
I want to feel what its like to whimper, waiting quietly,
for the sting of your hand. On my face, ass, body.

I want to be pushed to the ground, to my knees.
Moaning loudly as you take me from behind.
I want to feel what it's like to relinquish control of
the moment I orgasm, shuddering. Every moment.

Robin Lane ( me )

Tell me what you think. Any sort of critique is welcome.
Edit Changed the second line of the second 'graph.
Original line; Taken from behind, moaning hotly as you groan.