Back When I was Four
Under the Wires
Sarah had ice cream
David had a popcycle
and I had iced fudge
When we were done eating
Sarah had nothing
David had a popcyle stick
and I had a woodden stick
David and I concluded
that we had made
the best choices
because we had something
in the end
David said
what he got
was better
I have to agree
the red plastic stick
looked like a sword
it did look nice
But when we got inside
my mom
took the plastic stick
She wanted
to make more
popcycles with it
So in the end
I was the only one
who still
had something
I was damn proud
at that moment
that's why I remember
Under the Wires
Sarah had ice cream
David had a popcycle
and I had iced fudge
When we were done eating
Sarah had nothing
David had a popcyle stick
and I had a woodden stick
David and I concluded
that we had made
the best choices
because we had something
in the end
David said
what he got
was better
I have to agree
the red plastic stick
looked like a sword
it did look nice
But when we got inside
my mom
took the plastic stick
She wanted
to make more
popcycles with it
So in the end
I was the only one
who still
had something
I was damn proud
at that moment
that's why I remember
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nofi:
i like that alot.
samling:
i love it. that's a great poem.