Some Poems i dug out: Feedback would be awesome
'Hopeless"
I know I am
I know Im not
I know my heart
was a sable spot
I know the lives
Ive loved and lost
I know my heart
was covered in frost
I know the things
you hold so dear
I know all the things
you want to hear
I know my life
but I dont know yours
And still Im walking
this hall of doors
Your choice in front
and mine behind
I take another step
and hope youre mine
I know you are not
and I know you wont be
I just remember the things
that you said to me.
I remember your smell
your feel your touch
I remember these things
and want them so much
I know youre not
mine to behold
but just one more time
I wish you I could hold.
*~*~*
Then it continued with:
'Hall of Doors'
Alone I stride
With nothing to hide
Down the long lonesome road
To mah left and right
throwing off great light
bitter, and lonely, and cold.
The doors stretch on
into a window facing the dawn
That I could never reach, though I tried
Colored and shining
they set my heart pining
to know whats on the other side:
One shines green
as soft pale sheen
a heart broken for envy and greed
One shines blue
a sapphire hue
a loss, not giving what I did need
One shines red
A love lost, dead
I threw it away, all for naught
One shines black,
A sable, like nights back
For the void that your leaving brought.
Colors and doors
What are they all for?
What do they mean these things?
I walk and stumble
my thoughts all a jumble
But still I await what the future may bring.
'Hopeless"
I know I am
I know Im not
I know my heart
was a sable spot
I know the lives
Ive loved and lost
I know my heart
was covered in frost
I know the things
you hold so dear
I know all the things
you want to hear
I know my life
but I dont know yours
And still Im walking
this hall of doors
Your choice in front
and mine behind
I take another step
and hope youre mine
I know you are not
and I know you wont be
I just remember the things
that you said to me.
I remember your smell
your feel your touch
I remember these things
and want them so much
I know youre not
mine to behold
but just one more time
I wish you I could hold.
*~*~*
Then it continued with:
'Hall of Doors'
Alone I stride
With nothing to hide
Down the long lonesome road
To mah left and right
throwing off great light
bitter, and lonely, and cold.
The doors stretch on
into a window facing the dawn
That I could never reach, though I tried
Colored and shining
they set my heart pining
to know whats on the other side:
One shines green
as soft pale sheen
a heart broken for envy and greed
One shines blue
a sapphire hue
a loss, not giving what I did need
One shines red
A love lost, dead
I threw it away, all for naught
One shines black,
A sable, like nights back
For the void that your leaving brought.
Colors and doors
What are they all for?
What do they mean these things?
I walk and stumble
my thoughts all a jumble
But still I await what the future may bring.