evelynmarie

Love your new set!!

You are cute... but I feel like in this set you weren't really modeling so much as mucking about with a camera. Don't get me wrong, there are a couple of stellar shots in there- hello- photos 22 and 66- gorgeous! But there are a lot of really unflattering shots that should have been edited out of the set (23,43, 46).

Pay attention to the shapes that your body is making, and your facial expressions. Concentrate and practice prior to shooting, and don't just send in all the pictures- pick and choose the best, this will make your set look more professional and polished/

Lastly- please, spit out the gum. You don't see any front page sets nowadays with people chewing food...It's a total turn off to see a sticky, chewed up wad of something in someone's mouth.

Overall though- you have serious potential- killer curves, an adorable face, I would love to see another set from you!