Ok, so I'm gonna do something that I've never done before and post a full copy of a very short story I wrote a few years ago. Basically I got bored one night and just started typing and the following crap is what spewed forth on the page.
I have already posted it in one of the groups, but unless you a member of that group you can't see it. So here it goes, for all to see.
Tell me what you think.
I have already posted it in one of the groups, but unless you a member of that group you can't see it. So here it goes, for all to see.
Tell me what you think.
SPOILERS! (Click to view)
-- CLOSING TIME --
You've quietly tormented him since he walked through the door for work. Always trying to avoid him while you're on the floor, but waiting to see if it was him who answered the service calls you made each time. Everytime he'd answer you'd smile to yourself and every so often you'd feel his had on the wooden divider as you brushed too close. Making little comments everytime, waiting for him to bite at one, just to see if he'd say something just a little naughty.
You've been waiting for your chance to do the close with him and even wore your skirt to work knowing that it would torment him just that little bit more, but you wonder just a little cause he keeps reminding you that there's no stuffing around during the close. It's not really the response you're looking for. You even try to look at his eyes sometimes to see if they give anything away, but you're just not sure what you see.
As the afternoon wears on and you finally watch him dragging in all the stock and pulling down the doors, you can't help but be a little excited as maybe now he'll start to play a little as the last staff member leaves for the day, but his attention is still fixed on closing down the last register as you chat away to him trying to get the response you're looking for.
Making your way up to the office, you don't really hear much of what he's telling you needs to be done, you're to busy watching his ass as he walks up the stairs in front of you.
Of course you ask him what to do as he hands you the papers, cause you didn't really hear a thing he said before, but at least he smiles at you as he shakes his head and tells you that "you're shocking".
As he puts the papers on the desk in front of you he turns your chair to the desk and leans over the back of you with his head next to yours and shows you what you need to sort with what. Finally, you start to feel more of the warmth you've been waiting for and he kisses you on the head before heading back to his own desk.
"God, he's such a torment that it's almost cruel".
You both continue to talk as you work through all the paperwork, waiting for the last report to finish running. You're finding it hard to focus on what you need to do as your mind keeps wandering to other things. Still wondering if he's going to do anything.
Finally the last of the paperwork is done and as he puts it all away he tells you to go get your stuff. Now you're really starting to think he's just going to tease you and leave you hanging again.
But as you're getting your stuff you hear the office door close and the sound of his heavy boots on the floor behind you. Until finally you feel his hands on your waist as you're rummaging through your locker. You're eyes close as he pulls you back against his body, his arms now wrapped around you and the feeling of his lips brushing against the side of your neck. You're finally alone and the days work is done.
He just holds you for a minute before his hands slide under your top against your skin and you feel him rub the bottom of your tummy along the line of the waist on your skirt while his other hand moves around the bottom of your ribs and lingers. His hot breath on your neck and the slight touch of his tongue on your skin as he closes his lips on you in a light kiss.
Your breath catches a little and you feel yourself shiver as he slides his hand further into your skirt and runs a finger just inside the band of the tights you're wearing until his hand slides further in rubbing along the top of your g-string.
His other hand continues up over the front of your bra and presses just a little more as he rubs over your breasts making your nipples start to harden. You can feel yourself getting warmer and wetter at his touch, wondering if he will feel it. He's such a torment with the slow movement, but your not about to stop him either savouring every moment. So you let yourself lean back into him.
As he slides his hand up under your bra you can feel his fingers close around your breast and slide forward to close around you hardening nipples. The feeling just making you wetter still.
The other hand goes deeper again, rubbing down the front of your g-string and he can feel how hot and wet you are now, that he almost purrs like a big cat in your ear as he continues his kissing. One finger running along the line of the g-string, softly and ever so slightly between your thighs. You catch your breath at the feeling of his hand down there and you just know that he can feel how wet you are now.
His fingers tighten around your nipples, squeezing harder, tight enough to make you feel a little pinch which just excites you more, and his hand in your tights moves around to the front as he slides his fingers between your legs. You breath deeper as there's no denying now that he can feel how wet you are as his fingers slide along your g-string making you soak it through. So slippery and hot.
He suddenly takes his hands out of your tights and top and you think to yourself don't stop now. God he's not going to torment me again is he and just leave it like this?.
Leaning back into him you can feel that he's been enjoying this as well as you can feel him getting harder through his clothes.
You just want to tell him not to stop, but are almost scared to say something. It felt so good with his hands on your skin and knowing he could feel how wet you are.
Still leaning back into his shoulder as he continues to kiss your neck you feel his hands on the side of your skirt and realise he's pulling your skirt up at the sides. Has he somehow forgotten you're wearing tights? He is a bit thick sometimes.
Once your skirt is up you feel his hands slide into the side of your tights as he slides them down your legs and takes them off you. You wonder how the hell he just got them off you without taking your shoes off. Is he talented or just plain determined?.
You think to yourself, god, I didn't shave my legs today, but he doesn't seem to notice as he kisses the back of your thigh just below your ass, and you feel his hands on your bare thighs.
You can feel your legs shaking a little and think to yourself, don't fall now.
As he stands up, letting you skirt fall again, he turns you to face him and pulls you close. His arms wrapped around you as he leans down to kiss you in a long lingering kiss. His lips against yours as you feel the heat from his body just burn right through you.
He slowly moves you backwards and guides you to the couch. As he sits you down he kneels in front of you and looks straight into your eyes with the wicked grin he gets sometimes.
If only you could see through those eyes and get into his head to know what was going on in there and every so often he'll give you a glimpse at what lies behind, burried deep in his soul, but he doesn't seem to allow anyone to really get inside. For now you'll take what he lets you to see.
As he kneels in front of you he slides his hands back up under your skirt and around your backside. He pulls your hips closer to him until your legs are wrapped round him as you both continue to kiss. You feel the front of your skirt sliding up as his hands move around to the tops of your thighs.
You can feel him leaning you back into the couch as his kissing moves back down under your chin and down the front of your neck. His hands hold you tight as his thumbs rub under the side strings of your g-string and down inside the front of it.
His kissing continues down the front of you, over your top. Kissing your breasts you can feel his hot breath as he wraps his lips around one of your nipples through your top. It's such a torment to feel his lips through your top. You just want to feel his lips close on your bare nipples. His hands rub down your legs to just above the backs of your knees and back up the tops of your thighs again. Your back arches a little at the feeling.
As his kisses move further down your body and across your tummy his hands start to lift your skirt back which makes you shiver a little as you feel yourself getting so wet that you can feel it starting to drip, and his kisses move to the tops of your thighs, just above your knees.
With his kissing moving back up your legs, you reach down and grab at the back of his thick hair. Running your fingers through it and grabbing to pull his head closer
You slide further down the couch, your back arching as his lips move around the edge of your g-string and across the top. You can feel his hot breath going down between your legs and he can feel the wet heat coming from you.
He lowers himself down between your legs further and moves your legs up over his shoulders as his kisses move down the front of your g-string. You catch yourself taking a deep breath as his mouth moves over your clit and his tongue runs up between your lips lapping up your wetness through the g-string. You pull his head in tighter with you fingers still wrapped in his hair.
He pulls you tighter into his face as his tongue slides you g-string aside and slides into you, licking up and flicking over the top of your clit. His teeth close over your clit and pinch just enough to excite you more as he then closes his lips around it and sucks.
His tongue moves up and down between your lips, back and forth over your clit like a big cat drinking a saucer of milk. Your body moves with every lick back and forth also.
You feel every movement of his tongue sliding between your lips and every so often as it does he slides it into you, his lips close around you and you can feel his sucking.
His lips close around your clit again as he sucks on it, the tip of his tongue flicking at it faster and faster until you can't take it anymore. Your breath catches and your body shudders as you finally cum and he suck and licks at the wetness coming out of you.
You can feel that grin of his, forming on his lips as he kisses your lips and inside thighs. Giving the odd quick lick just to make you jump again, like some wicked torture.
You want to feel him inside you and grab at his belt, but he holds your hands and tells you not yet. Savour this moment, that one is for another time. This time was all about your pleasure.
He has to help you put your tights back on because your legs are a little shaky. You know you have to, but don't really want to.
As he moves onto the couch beside you he picks you up and sits you on his lap where you can just sit for a few more minutes with your arms around him, feeling his body heat and satisfied, if only partially, for a moment. You just soak him up, the feeling of your body on his as you lean your head on his shoulder and feel his heartbeat.
As you both kiss your mind is already thinking about when that next time will come. I guess you're just going to have to wait and see...
-- CLOSING TIME --
You've quietly tormented him since he walked through the door for work. Always trying to avoid him while you're on the floor, but waiting to see if it was him who answered the service calls you made each time. Everytime he'd answer you'd smile to yourself and every so often you'd feel his had on the wooden divider as you brushed too close. Making little comments everytime, waiting for him to bite at one, just to see if he'd say something just a little naughty.
You've been waiting for your chance to do the close with him and even wore your skirt to work knowing that it would torment him just that little bit more, but you wonder just a little cause he keeps reminding you that there's no stuffing around during the close. It's not really the response you're looking for. You even try to look at his eyes sometimes to see if they give anything away, but you're just not sure what you see.
As the afternoon wears on and you finally watch him dragging in all the stock and pulling down the doors, you can't help but be a little excited as maybe now he'll start to play a little as the last staff member leaves for the day, but his attention is still fixed on closing down the last register as you chat away to him trying to get the response you're looking for.
Making your way up to the office, you don't really hear much of what he's telling you needs to be done, you're to busy watching his ass as he walks up the stairs in front of you.
Of course you ask him what to do as he hands you the papers, cause you didn't really hear a thing he said before, but at least he smiles at you as he shakes his head and tells you that "you're shocking".
As he puts the papers on the desk in front of you he turns your chair to the desk and leans over the back of you with his head next to yours and shows you what you need to sort with what. Finally, you start to feel more of the warmth you've been waiting for and he kisses you on the head before heading back to his own desk.
"God, he's such a torment that it's almost cruel".
You both continue to talk as you work through all the paperwork, waiting for the last report to finish running. You're finding it hard to focus on what you need to do as your mind keeps wandering to other things. Still wondering if he's going to do anything.
Finally the last of the paperwork is done and as he puts it all away he tells you to go get your stuff. Now you're really starting to think he's just going to tease you and leave you hanging again.
But as you're getting your stuff you hear the office door close and the sound of his heavy boots on the floor behind you. Until finally you feel his hands on your waist as you're rummaging through your locker. You're eyes close as he pulls you back against his body, his arms now wrapped around you and the feeling of his lips brushing against the side of your neck. You're finally alone and the days work is done.
He just holds you for a minute before his hands slide under your top against your skin and you feel him rub the bottom of your tummy along the line of the waist on your skirt while his other hand moves around the bottom of your ribs and lingers. His hot breath on your neck and the slight touch of his tongue on your skin as he closes his lips on you in a light kiss.
Your breath catches a little and you feel yourself shiver as he slides his hand further into your skirt and runs a finger just inside the band of the tights you're wearing until his hand slides further in rubbing along the top of your g-string.
His other hand continues up over the front of your bra and presses just a little more as he rubs over your breasts making your nipples start to harden. You can feel yourself getting warmer and wetter at his touch, wondering if he will feel it. He's such a torment with the slow movement, but your not about to stop him either savouring every moment. So you let yourself lean back into him.
As he slides his hand up under your bra you can feel his fingers close around your breast and slide forward to close around you hardening nipples. The feeling just making you wetter still.
The other hand goes deeper again, rubbing down the front of your g-string and he can feel how hot and wet you are now, that he almost purrs like a big cat in your ear as he continues his kissing. One finger running along the line of the g-string, softly and ever so slightly between your thighs. You catch your breath at the feeling of his hand down there and you just know that he can feel how wet you are now.
His fingers tighten around your nipples, squeezing harder, tight enough to make you feel a little pinch which just excites you more, and his hand in your tights moves around to the front as he slides his fingers between your legs. You breath deeper as there's no denying now that he can feel how wet you are as his fingers slide along your g-string making you soak it through. So slippery and hot.
He suddenly takes his hands out of your tights and top and you think to yourself don't stop now. God he's not going to torment me again is he and just leave it like this?.
Leaning back into him you can feel that he's been enjoying this as well as you can feel him getting harder through his clothes.
You just want to tell him not to stop, but are almost scared to say something. It felt so good with his hands on your skin and knowing he could feel how wet you are.
Still leaning back into his shoulder as he continues to kiss your neck you feel his hands on the side of your skirt and realise he's pulling your skirt up at the sides. Has he somehow forgotten you're wearing tights? He is a bit thick sometimes.
Once your skirt is up you feel his hands slide into the side of your tights as he slides them down your legs and takes them off you. You wonder how the hell he just got them off you without taking your shoes off. Is he talented or just plain determined?.
You think to yourself, god, I didn't shave my legs today, but he doesn't seem to notice as he kisses the back of your thigh just below your ass, and you feel his hands on your bare thighs.
You can feel your legs shaking a little and think to yourself, don't fall now.
As he stands up, letting you skirt fall again, he turns you to face him and pulls you close. His arms wrapped around you as he leans down to kiss you in a long lingering kiss. His lips against yours as you feel the heat from his body just burn right through you.
He slowly moves you backwards and guides you to the couch. As he sits you down he kneels in front of you and looks straight into your eyes with the wicked grin he gets sometimes.
If only you could see through those eyes and get into his head to know what was going on in there and every so often he'll give you a glimpse at what lies behind, burried deep in his soul, but he doesn't seem to allow anyone to really get inside. For now you'll take what he lets you to see.
As he kneels in front of you he slides his hands back up under your skirt and around your backside. He pulls your hips closer to him until your legs are wrapped round him as you both continue to kiss. You feel the front of your skirt sliding up as his hands move around to the tops of your thighs.
You can feel him leaning you back into the couch as his kissing moves back down under your chin and down the front of your neck. His hands hold you tight as his thumbs rub under the side strings of your g-string and down inside the front of it.
His kissing continues down the front of you, over your top. Kissing your breasts you can feel his hot breath as he wraps his lips around one of your nipples through your top. It's such a torment to feel his lips through your top. You just want to feel his lips close on your bare nipples. His hands rub down your legs to just above the backs of your knees and back up the tops of your thighs again. Your back arches a little at the feeling.
As his kisses move further down your body and across your tummy his hands start to lift your skirt back which makes you shiver a little as you feel yourself getting so wet that you can feel it starting to drip, and his kisses move to the tops of your thighs, just above your knees.
With his kissing moving back up your legs, you reach down and grab at the back of his thick hair. Running your fingers through it and grabbing to pull his head closer
You slide further down the couch, your back arching as his lips move around the edge of your g-string and across the top. You can feel his hot breath going down between your legs and he can feel the wet heat coming from you.
He lowers himself down between your legs further and moves your legs up over his shoulders as his kisses move down the front of your g-string. You catch yourself taking a deep breath as his mouth moves over your clit and his tongue runs up between your lips lapping up your wetness through the g-string. You pull his head in tighter with you fingers still wrapped in his hair.
He pulls you tighter into his face as his tongue slides you g-string aside and slides into you, licking up and flicking over the top of your clit. His teeth close over your clit and pinch just enough to excite you more as he then closes his lips around it and sucks.
His tongue moves up and down between your lips, back and forth over your clit like a big cat drinking a saucer of milk. Your body moves with every lick back and forth also.
You feel every movement of his tongue sliding between your lips and every so often as it does he slides it into you, his lips close around you and you can feel his sucking.
His lips close around your clit again as he sucks on it, the tip of his tongue flicking at it faster and faster until you can't take it anymore. Your breath catches and your body shudders as you finally cum and he suck and licks at the wetness coming out of you.
You can feel that grin of his, forming on his lips as he kisses your lips and inside thighs. Giving the odd quick lick just to make you jump again, like some wicked torture.
You want to feel him inside you and grab at his belt, but he holds your hands and tells you not yet. Savour this moment, that one is for another time. This time was all about your pleasure.
He has to help you put your tights back on because your legs are a little shaky. You know you have to, but don't really want to.
As he moves onto the couch beside you he picks you up and sits you on his lap where you can just sit for a few more minutes with your arms around him, feeling his body heat and satisfied, if only partially, for a moment. You just soak him up, the feeling of your body on his as you lean your head on his shoulder and feel his heartbeat.
As you both kiss your mind is already thinking about when that next time will come. I guess you're just going to have to wait and see...
There is a follow up to this one that's posted in the group, but if you liked this one enough I'll post it here too.
While maybe one day I'd like to be able to write better, it's more for my own creative enjoyment. I couldn't fathom actually writing for money. I think that would put too much pressure on things and I'd lose the desire to write.
Hope you enjoyed.