deviant

yeah yeah! i got my book back from my editor yesterday! and at her suggestion i'm going to make it one book (originally i was going to publish it as 2 seperate books, the first book being the 196 completed pages that i'd submitted to be editted and book 2 being the next 200 pages that i'm currently outlining).

tonight while working at the video store i was going over some of the editorial notes and i came across a small paragraph that i felt i just had to share with you all. it's a description of an angel:

She blinked her eyes and in that split second, an image of the girl burned deep into Dominique's brain. The girl had short blue hair, her cheeks were decorated with glitter and her lips painted the same shade as her hair. Her eyes were completely black and her perfect breasts were covered in the same sparkles that her cheeks had been dusted with. Light spilled from her cunt and her pubic hair was stained blue, the glow grom below working its way up around to her short patch of hair, giving it an irridescence like none Dominique had ever witnessed.

there, that's it i just felt the need to share that with the world of suicide. goodnight&good-day all!