First, you're silent.
You absorb, then a buzz is created.
This buzz travels, and if it is liked, it travels far.
People that like the buzz increase the buzz, making it louder.
The buzz grows to a hum, sometimes a roar.
People everywhere hear it, your voice, your screaming roar.
Your sound then deafens and screams throughout the sky.
Thats when people tell you to shut the fuck up.
And they kill you.
Thank God.
You absorb, then a buzz is created.
This buzz travels, and if it is liked, it travels far.
People that like the buzz increase the buzz, making it louder.
The buzz grows to a hum, sometimes a roar.
People everywhere hear it, your voice, your screaming roar.
Your sound then deafens and screams throughout the sky.
Thats when people tell you to shut the fuck up.
And they kill you.
Thank God.
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I may have to drive to Hesperia at some point in the next few days.. perhaps I visit? when are you home?
oh I do not like that fellow either - and I agree that things are very much ingrained human condition. It is just a poem capturing a moment.
leave it alone. you are much too critical of your own work - you need to direct really. still write, but think about the other option. You would be very good at inuendo.
much love babe.
that would just be
odd.