Got my first MFA packet back today, special Saturday FedEx delivery because my mentor waited too long to send it. I need to revise 20 pages (of the 42 I sent) and add 20 pages of new. Don't know if I can do it that way. May have to revise the full 40 pages AND add 20 more. I also, apparently, completely missed the point of the annotations, but I know better now what to do. I'm not supposed to look at a book, but at a concept and see how it works IN that book. Bit confusing, since I'm coming from an involuntary literature background. But I'll get it . . . maybe
Now I just need to find out if he wants me to do a redo on the papers or do new. The letter from my mentor was a touch confusing.

