(As I commonly do with blog space, using it as practice for philosophy and story, I wrote this story on the spot without going back for any correction. I realize that half way through I change tense, but oh well. There was even a point where I began to change POV. Amature.)
Davey passed through the beads hung over the door way just under the sign reading, "Nobody 17 and under allowed inside." Rows of movies glimmered under the flicking lights on the ceiling and he passed by a few other men who were under great contemplation reading various movie boxes. At first he was overwhealmed by the barrage of images of women bent over, pussies haging out with many of them having their lips around a guy's cock the sizes of which reduced his own to centimeters. Davey had once considered a career in porn, but had decided that his dick was far too small to please the camera, let alone a lady. He had a chance once, but the lady's skin was as dark as ash as made his dick pop out so brightly to himself that he hopped back into his clothes and bolted out of her parent's front door. Yvonne, the woman on the cover in front of him, was just as dark and would not do him justice, but Megan, the woman and the cover beside it, was as white as snow and he imagines blending into her perfectly. He takes note of the time and realizes that he's been in the adult section for three minutes, which is too much time for others to see him, so he grabs Megan's masterpeice and shoves through other men and pushes past the beads. A family just outside looking over adventure films catches the sound and looks over at him, three children and all. He reaches into his jacket for shades, but they're not there. Realizing that he's made a jesture for something in his jacket he feels he should complete the motion or else fall prey to more judgement under the families eye, so he pulls his hand out and motions it up to his face as though her were putting on a pair of glasses. The kids laugh and the mother turns them away. He heads to the check out counter, which happens to be the only counter, and stand behind a couple men in line. The girl at the counter looks like she's either just starting college or is still in high school. Her hair is green, cut short, and is part down the middle like a man's shaved in the back neck area. There's two other girls who look the same age if not younger, sitting next to her, one on each side of her. They have school books spread out over the counter and appear to be studying.
"No," the green hair says to the girl on her right, "if the five is next to the parenthesis then its distributed to everything inside them, but you have to solve the equation in the parenthesis first so be sure to deal those exponents there."
The guy in front of her is fidgeting through his wallet and after a tumutlous srtuggle with his jeans he manages to pull it out and pay for the rental. Another guy joins the one in front of me and holds up to him a porn.
"Get this one too, chicks got big ass tits on the cover."
"These things aren't cheap dude, we've got three already."
"What was it that David Hume said the was complex about the theory of cause and effect?" The girl to green's left asks reading off a sheet of paper on top of her book.
"I'll pitch some money in, besides this one has some major girl on girl action."
"I wish I had this bitch, look at her tits, there ain't no way you can meet a girl that good in real life."
"He said that all though we can observe instances of cause and effect in the world, what's not observable is the idea of cause and effect. So if everything we learn is by means of observing causes and effect, then how did we come to know the theory?"
"Look at that ass, that's a woman."
"You multiply first, then add." Green says looking over at her right the up at the two guys ahead of me. "Ready?"
They pay and then Davey steps up handing over the movie face down, but forgetting there's even more sex shots on the back. She turns around to the shelves of videos behind her and finds mine. Another kid, a young man, comes out from one of the other aisle holding a novel.
"Okay Deedee, I've read it and I still don't get how to answer some of the essay questions."
"I'll help you in a second." She responds and comes back with my movie. "Sorry, helping my study group."
"That's cool." He says and let's his eyes drop to her chest. At first he's not sure if she has breasts because her Pearl Jam shirt is too loose on her, but then she shifts around and he sees one point out.
"I'm never going to get this done." The girl on her left says. "I don't understand a thing this Hume dude is saying."
"Well I do so don't worry." Deedee says handing him his change and the movie.
"Are you the one they copy off of?" He asks.
"No, but I am a know-it-all."
"Really?"
"I wasn't skipped two grades for nothing. Have a good night." And immediately she returns to her friends.
Davey leaves the store and realizes that he knew more than Deedee, and she was wrong in the last thing she said to him.
Davey passed through the beads hung over the door way just under the sign reading, "Nobody 17 and under allowed inside." Rows of movies glimmered under the flicking lights on the ceiling and he passed by a few other men who were under great contemplation reading various movie boxes. At first he was overwhealmed by the barrage of images of women bent over, pussies haging out with many of them having their lips around a guy's cock the sizes of which reduced his own to centimeters. Davey had once considered a career in porn, but had decided that his dick was far too small to please the camera, let alone a lady. He had a chance once, but the lady's skin was as dark as ash as made his dick pop out so brightly to himself that he hopped back into his clothes and bolted out of her parent's front door. Yvonne, the woman on the cover in front of him, was just as dark and would not do him justice, but Megan, the woman and the cover beside it, was as white as snow and he imagines blending into her perfectly. He takes note of the time and realizes that he's been in the adult section for three minutes, which is too much time for others to see him, so he grabs Megan's masterpeice and shoves through other men and pushes past the beads. A family just outside looking over adventure films catches the sound and looks over at him, three children and all. He reaches into his jacket for shades, but they're not there. Realizing that he's made a jesture for something in his jacket he feels he should complete the motion or else fall prey to more judgement under the families eye, so he pulls his hand out and motions it up to his face as though her were putting on a pair of glasses. The kids laugh and the mother turns them away. He heads to the check out counter, which happens to be the only counter, and stand behind a couple men in line. The girl at the counter looks like she's either just starting college or is still in high school. Her hair is green, cut short, and is part down the middle like a man's shaved in the back neck area. There's two other girls who look the same age if not younger, sitting next to her, one on each side of her. They have school books spread out over the counter and appear to be studying.
"No," the green hair says to the girl on her right, "if the five is next to the parenthesis then its distributed to everything inside them, but you have to solve the equation in the parenthesis first so be sure to deal those exponents there."
The guy in front of her is fidgeting through his wallet and after a tumutlous srtuggle with his jeans he manages to pull it out and pay for the rental. Another guy joins the one in front of me and holds up to him a porn.
"Get this one too, chicks got big ass tits on the cover."
"These things aren't cheap dude, we've got three already."
"What was it that David Hume said the was complex about the theory of cause and effect?" The girl to green's left asks reading off a sheet of paper on top of her book.
"I'll pitch some money in, besides this one has some major girl on girl action."
"I wish I had this bitch, look at her tits, there ain't no way you can meet a girl that good in real life."
"He said that all though we can observe instances of cause and effect in the world, what's not observable is the idea of cause and effect. So if everything we learn is by means of observing causes and effect, then how did we come to know the theory?"
"Look at that ass, that's a woman."
"You multiply first, then add." Green says looking over at her right the up at the two guys ahead of me. "Ready?"
They pay and then Davey steps up handing over the movie face down, but forgetting there's even more sex shots on the back. She turns around to the shelves of videos behind her and finds mine. Another kid, a young man, comes out from one of the other aisle holding a novel.
"Okay Deedee, I've read it and I still don't get how to answer some of the essay questions."
"I'll help you in a second." She responds and comes back with my movie. "Sorry, helping my study group."
"That's cool." He says and let's his eyes drop to her chest. At first he's not sure if she has breasts because her Pearl Jam shirt is too loose on her, but then she shifts around and he sees one point out.
"I'm never going to get this done." The girl on her left says. "I don't understand a thing this Hume dude is saying."
"Well I do so don't worry." Deedee says handing him his change and the movie.
"Are you the one they copy off of?" He asks.
"No, but I am a know-it-all."
"Really?"
"I wasn't skipped two grades for nothing. Have a good night." And immediately she returns to her friends.
Davey leaves the store and realizes that he knew more than Deedee, and she was wrong in the last thing she said to him.
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