boy_named_sue

So last night I was trying to fall asleep but I couldnt because words kept poppin into my head. I have never really been a writer so I really dont know what this is. I guess its a poem or something. But if you dont like it keep it to yourself, but if you do I would love some feed back on it.

The heartless souls of happy, hollow people

We seek fashion and trends and make fake hollow friends
We seek darkenss cause we believe it is light.
And think that it will take us to new heights.
Nothing is new, all is old.
The new thought you had was had long ago.
Death is here and he will take you away.
I guess now is a good time to pray.
You have faith in God but he has none in you.
You have taken his gift and tossed it away.
And now is as good as any for you to begin to pay.
False Faith and false hope have lead you astray.
You will not see the path because the devil has lead you away.
You beg and you pray for more time to stay.
But now it is to late you have been taken away.
As you are taken away your scream "dear god please"
But he has no forgiveness, he says that you never believed.
Now that your gone and your name has faded away
You begin to regret the choices you made.
Was it all worth it, what was the point.
Your life without meaning was taken away.
Now it is gone and there is nothing to show for the use of your heartless hollow soul.