boleyn

I think you had some really good poses and using the boa is a good idea for a prop. It's a very sexy set. I guess the only suggestion i have beyond better lighting is that in a couple of the shots there is a lot of blank space. 15 and 13 are very sexy poses, but there isn't enough focus on you because of the large proportion of empty space. They would make an awesome photo if you could zoom in more, orient the camera vertically, or have an interesting background that fits with your theme. did you shoot this set yourself with a camera on a tripod? Having someone else do the photography can help a lot with composition isues like that. Then there is a lot more flexibility in distance from the camera and the orientation of the picture. I hope that helps.

Oh, and you have very sexy eyes (see photo above ) You should deffinately get a couple close ups of your face.


I just read the post above. You probably have already know this, but in many threads the staff has consistantly asked that you do not photoshop any of the pictures before submitting it. They can fix contrast problems and the raw images are much easier for them to work with.

[Edited on Dec 08, 2004 9:58AM]