NaNoWriMo started tonight. national writing month that is. i'm at 2400 words.....gotta get to 50,000 by the end of the month. which i have no excuse of missing this year, being that i'm unemployed and have nothing to do but write. here's the first part. i'm gonna post certain parts to get some opinions. it's a romance....let me know what you think....
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The door had hardly closed before they were entangled in each others arms. She could hardly breathe anymore. It had been way too long. Eight months of agony consumed both of them as they kissed. Their lips pushed hard together. He hands slid all over her body, from her hips, to her arms, up in her hair. He held her head firmly on either side, while he tasted her lips. His tongue sliding against hers, it was hard for her to remember a time when she didnt want this. When she didnt want him next to her, his hands on her, feeling his body against hers. His bag had already dropped to the floor, and she was working on the buttons on his ACU jacket. His hands slid up under her shirt, pulling it up over her head. Her long brown hair fell down over her shoulders. He took a moment to stop and look at her. Her eyes locked with his, and he ran his hand over her face, moving her hair from in front of her eyes. Her hair had gotten so long, it wasnt anything he was used too. It suited her though, and made her look that much more attractive to him in that moment. As they looked at each other, her eyes started to fill with water, and he smiled. He had been waiting for this; waiting to see just how much love she had hidden away within herself. His buttons undone, she slid her hands up his chest to his shoulders. His eyes were so sincere. She had been so afraid of this moment. She was scared that when she looked into his eyes they may be empty, or even worse, just filled with lust. Instead they radiated the same love that she had seen over a year ago when she first woke up in his arms. That is all she needed to know. Her heart was going to explode in her chest. She wished so many things, but right now, one of those wishes was coming true. She took a deep breath in, not sure what she was going to say. So far she had only gotten out an eager hi before he scooped her up in his arms. As she opened her mouth to speak, he put his fingers to her lips. He smiled, which made her exhale and melt all at the same time. He replaced his fingers with his lips. Kissing her slowly and gently. His arms wrapped around her entire body, and he lifted her up, walking forward slowly towards the bed. She felt like she was in a dream. She had spent so many nights imagining this very moment. Wondering what they would say, what they would do, if it would be awkward or like a complete fairy tale. Happily she knew she was getting the latter of the two. Tears started to run down her cheeks. There were so many words that she wanted to say, but right now just feeling him against her. His weight on top of her as they laid on the bed, his mouth on hers, his hands caressing her entire body, the words drifted into space. They had spent months saying so many heartfelt words, but now they werent needed. Everything they had said, or needed to say was being said in a different way. It made her smile as he kissed her neck, and she wrapped her arms around him tightly, never wanting to let him go every again.
He undid her pants gently, sliding them down her thighs, knees, ankles, onto the floor. She pulled his t-shirt up over his head. She sat up to run her lips over his chest. Her tongue stopping at his nipples, then running up to his neck. As she kissed his neck, he undid her bra, and she unbuckled his pants. He stood for a moment, pulling down his pants and boxers. She laid on the bed naked in front of him, and he just smiled at her. You are so beautiful, he said. She blushed as she normally would, not really believing him, and said, Youre crazy. He slid his body on top of hers, her legs now wrapping around him. They continued to kiss and touch, enjoying each other, and then he slowly slid himself into her. She let out a sigh of relief. She had forgot how amazing he felt, how perfect sex always was between them. She hadnt been able to find it in anyone since, and knew that it was because she loved him more than she could have ever loved anyone else. As he slowly thrust into her, he kissed her neck and ear, his hands sliding over her breasts. She moaned louder, now feeling like she was lost in everything that was happening. His arms slid under her, and he held her close. You feel so good, she said into his ear. Ive missed you, he said into hers. As she got closer to finishing, he whispered on last thing in her ear, I love you Maria, and she felt her body shake and explode. She wrapped her arms around his neck, and said, Oh God I love you so much, and she felt him thrust faster until he collapsed on top of her. They laid there in a tight embrace, kissing, touching, and looking into each others eyes. The easy part was over. Making love was what they did well. She was hoping that the rest of it would, this time, come just as easy to them.
The door had hardly closed before they were entangled in each others arms. She could hardly breathe anymore. It had been way too long. Eight months of agony consumed both of them as they kissed. Their lips pushed hard together. He hands slid all over her body, from her hips, to her arms, up in her hair. He held her head firmly on either side, while he tasted her lips. His tongue sliding against hers, it was hard for her to remember a time when she didnt want this. When she didnt want him next to her, his hands on her, feeling his body against hers. His bag had already dropped to the floor, and she was working on the buttons on his ACU jacket. His hands slid up under her shirt, pulling it up over her head. Her long brown hair fell down over her shoulders. He took a moment to stop and look at her. Her eyes locked with his, and he ran his hand over her face, moving her hair from in front of her eyes. Her hair had gotten so long, it wasnt anything he was used too. It suited her though, and made her look that much more attractive to him in that moment. As they looked at each other, her eyes started to fill with water, and he smiled. He had been waiting for this; waiting to see just how much love she had hidden away within herself. His buttons undone, she slid her hands up his chest to his shoulders. His eyes were so sincere. She had been so afraid of this moment. She was scared that when she looked into his eyes they may be empty, or even worse, just filled with lust. Instead they radiated the same love that she had seen over a year ago when she first woke up in his arms. That is all she needed to know. Her heart was going to explode in her chest. She wished so many things, but right now, one of those wishes was coming true. She took a deep breath in, not sure what she was going to say. So far she had only gotten out an eager hi before he scooped her up in his arms. As she opened her mouth to speak, he put his fingers to her lips. He smiled, which made her exhale and melt all at the same time. He replaced his fingers with his lips. Kissing her slowly and gently. His arms wrapped around her entire body, and he lifted her up, walking forward slowly towards the bed. She felt like she was in a dream. She had spent so many nights imagining this very moment. Wondering what they would say, what they would do, if it would be awkward or like a complete fairy tale. Happily she knew she was getting the latter of the two. Tears started to run down her cheeks. There were so many words that she wanted to say, but right now just feeling him against her. His weight on top of her as they laid on the bed, his mouth on hers, his hands caressing her entire body, the words drifted into space. They had spent months saying so many heartfelt words, but now they werent needed. Everything they had said, or needed to say was being said in a different way. It made her smile as he kissed her neck, and she wrapped her arms around him tightly, never wanting to let him go every again.
He undid her pants gently, sliding them down her thighs, knees, ankles, onto the floor. She pulled his t-shirt up over his head. She sat up to run her lips over his chest. Her tongue stopping at his nipples, then running up to his neck. As she kissed his neck, he undid her bra, and she unbuckled his pants. He stood for a moment, pulling down his pants and boxers. She laid on the bed naked in front of him, and he just smiled at her. You are so beautiful, he said. She blushed as she normally would, not really believing him, and said, Youre crazy. He slid his body on top of hers, her legs now wrapping around him. They continued to kiss and touch, enjoying each other, and then he slowly slid himself into her. She let out a sigh of relief. She had forgot how amazing he felt, how perfect sex always was between them. She hadnt been able to find it in anyone since, and knew that it was because she loved him more than she could have ever loved anyone else. As he slowly thrust into her, he kissed her neck and ear, his hands sliding over her breasts. She moaned louder, now feeling like she was lost in everything that was happening. His arms slid under her, and he held her close. You feel so good, she said into his ear. Ive missed you, he said into hers. As she got closer to finishing, he whispered on last thing in her ear, I love you Maria, and she felt her body shake and explode. She wrapped her arms around his neck, and said, Oh God I love you so much, and she felt him thrust faster until he collapsed on top of her. They laid there in a tight embrace, kissing, touching, and looking into each others eyes. The easy part was over. Making love was what they did well. She was hoping that the rest of it would, this time, come just as easy to them.
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I was planning on doing NaNoWriMo, but I didn't start today... maybe I'll jump in tomorrow and see if I can make up for lost time!