I really need to write in here more often.
I woke up in a bad mood today. I had this idea for a poem, and so far I only have a couple of lines, but it is something like....
My fists are feeling anxious,
Hungry for the pain,
Searching out the quarry,
They wanna play a game
I know it's rhyming which automatically lowers it's appeal to a lot of "serious" poets, but I still like it so far. Lot more work to do though. You ever have one of those days where you wake up wanting to beat the shit outta someone; not even anyone in particular, you just wanna deal out some grade a ass kicking on the first poor fuck who pisses you off. Who'd believe I am a pacifist eh?
I woke up in a bad mood today. I had this idea for a poem, and so far I only have a couple of lines, but it is something like....
My fists are feeling anxious,
Hungry for the pain,
Searching out the quarry,
They wanna play a game
I know it's rhyming which automatically lowers it's appeal to a lot of "serious" poets, but I still like it so far. Lot more work to do though. You ever have one of those days where you wake up wanting to beat the shit outta someone; not even anyone in particular, you just wanna deal out some grade a ass kicking on the first poor fuck who pisses you off. Who'd believe I am a pacifist eh?
If you can make the words do magic to a persons mind, then your poems won't be judged because they rhyme. Your idea for that poem seems very fierce! Keep going. I'd love to read the rest!