since my first journal entry was never read by you guys i put two poems in it i wrote heres one of them..
FIRST DATE by Andevilica
Tell her that shes beautiful
and hope it works this time
even held the door for her
a gentleman in crime
walked her to her door tonight
watched her turn the key
licked your lips micheviously
tonight it was meant to be
She led you in for a few drinks
stared deeply into your eyes
she has no idea what shes doing
and for that begins demise
kiss her gently on her cheek
she moves to kiss your neck
happy she is so receptive
you both fall onto the deck
looking for the right protection
the lust started to fade
anger appeared and she screamed
*dont kill me with that spade*
Full moon covered by clouds
darkness had come to you
she ran away into the forest
and the chase was so fun to do
catching her was the best of all
her body so full of adrenaline
you chewed her up and spit her out
tomorrow youll do it again...
thanks and
ANDEVILICA!!
FIRST DATE by Andevilica
Tell her that shes beautiful
and hope it works this time
even held the door for her
a gentleman in crime
walked her to her door tonight
watched her turn the key
licked your lips micheviously
tonight it was meant to be
She led you in for a few drinks
stared deeply into your eyes
she has no idea what shes doing
and for that begins demise
kiss her gently on her cheek
she moves to kiss your neck
happy she is so receptive
you both fall onto the deck
looking for the right protection
the lust started to fade
anger appeared and she screamed
*dont kill me with that spade*
Full moon covered by clouds
darkness had come to you
she ran away into the forest
and the chase was so fun to do
catching her was the best of all
her body so full of adrenaline
you chewed her up and spit her out
tomorrow youll do it again...
thanks and
ANDEVILICA!!
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i like the poem, but the random turn of emotion was kinda off setting. very well written symbolism as well.
ps: i'm doing alright.