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I need anyone who can speak good English to correct an essay I just wrote.

Now.

It is about 600 words long and about god being dead. I don't believe in god at all so what I wrote can make you really angry if you are pious.

It is quite simple, I could not develop it because of the number of words allowed and had to keep it simple anyway. You'd just have to correct the vocabulary and the grammar. Not the content.

Anyone? I have to give it in in 5 hours.


Thank you very very much!