Hey all! had a pretty busy weekend...I saw bjork and it was a dream come true! but now its back to everyday life...which is pretty lame lol I think I need a hobby! lol
Dust forms on these artifacts
Screaming of all you left behind
Just foreign objects to me now
Leaving a whirlwind of pain
Big blur
Trinkets of promises
Broken and tarnished
Hunting no longer
For that sacred vow
Nothing more to find
Love the imagery and the deeper metaphor each object holds. It's a read more than once poem, which I love, it makes the reader stop. think. reread. Short and sharp, I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing Now where's my birthday poem? lol
Hey! Still new to this whole blog thing...what to write??? so much pressure yikes! well I'm sure something will come to me...
I am goin to go enjoy this nice weather with a cold beer!