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MARCH 29, 2013 @ 09:35 AM | 3 COMMENTS


Just before bed I see this email from my instructor.




Jesse,

I just had to tell you that your paper is f--ing great. Audacious and brilliant and you should write like this whenever you can.

You know I usually skim the last papers because people don't come back for them, and all I need is a grade.

Not yours. Too funny, intense, surprising.

Thanks,

Becky Roberts





I felt really good at first, and even slept very well. But then my ultra self consciousness wonders if the paper was actually that good, or if this teacher is just that easily impressed.

Here is the paper.

SPOILERS! (Click to view)

Literary Critique of Theodore Dreiser’s Sister Carrie from 1907 to 2013

After reading Sister Carrie I was left with a bad taste in my mouth. When I broke down the reasons that it did I realized it was because I have known these people in my life. This is the core of my paper. The main character Carrie Meeber, is a young girl that leaves home in a rather ill planned attempt to move to the city and change her life of farm work and small town to one of the big city life. She has a demanding craving for more that doesn’t seem to have anyway of being met. Within my own life I have had to deal with my own “Sister Carrie” as my own sister went through her wild child phase and bolted from home in the Bakersfield area and ran to Orange County for months. She left the family hanging with little to no reports of her goings on, her general health or whether or not she was ever coming home. Noting this, obviously personal information in my final essay seems taboo. Never use “I” within a College English paper was a rule I learned back in my first College English class. I understand this but it cuts into the heart of my comparison.
Reading over the article "Sister Carrie.” A Novel by Theodore Dreiser Review by: Joseph Hornor Coates The North American Review, Vol. 186, No. 623 (Oct., 1907)” (288) the main strength of Dreiser’s work noted by the author, Coates, is that Dreiser was able to truly capture the reality of the situations he was portraying in print, “His people are real people; he compels you to know them as he knows them, to see the scenes amid which they move as he sees them. He shows absolute sincerity, he plays you no tricks; he is rigidly uncompromising, he scorns to tamper with the truth as he knows it, he refuses any subterfuges or weak dallying with what, to him at least, are the crucial facts of life” (288), and now looking back for myself that reality in the writing was far too real for me. Dreiser’s work, though extremely early in his career, was vivid and clear. Although he was awkwardly putting some of the material to paper due to his own personal attachment to the characters inspiration, his own sister, he did so with as much honesty and genuine faith to the story as he could.
Once again I must touch on my own personal life within the relation to the text. I have been cheated on by a long term lover. I came from a broken home where my Mother left my Father for another man. All of these were key aspects of the reality within this text. Dreiser reflected the reality of betrayal and the weakness within the character of many so well that the book was able to turn one, possibly far too weak in emotional meddle for the task of the reading, into a ball of raw emotion that would toss about and flip flop in his sleep after reading the text. Although this made me uncomfortable, it also showed me how well the author connected the reality of the text to the reality around him. Such a challenge is not easily met and rarely is it able to be achieved.
My disagreements with the article are fairly simple. When the articles author states “Mr. Dreiser is concerned with the greater and far more important class, the working-people from whose ranks it is that the upper strata of the future are to inherit character; for in this country, at least, the proletary of to-day begets the leader of to-morrow.” (290) I believe he is dead wrong. Dreiser does not have an agenda within his work. Honestly it seems to be a type of biography or reflection of his sister’s deeds in her youth, whether or not he agrees with those deeds; that inspired him to put to paper. Although I do not believe he meant the work to critique her journey, or to point a finger, or to insult her, I do think that when reading it he had to be reined back in by others in order to stay on track without an agenda. To say that Dreiser believes that the lower class is coming up to inherit as the leaders of tomorrow is just not reflected in the work. In fact, it would be closer to the truth if he had said that the great class difference that was beginning in America at the time was begin reflected as a growing problem within the work. But of course hindsight is 20/20 and this was written prior to the gap becoming outrageously different between the rich and the poor.
That point being made. The novel does reflect many of the problems that now history shows were merely building at the time of its writing. The gilded age of America was only beginning and the great depression was just around the corner and coming on like a freight train. When you are walked through the streets of New York and have to deal with their harsh winters with the character Hurstwood, you can understand how this is just a precursor for something the nation deals with only a few years after. When the Captain is on the street begging for a crowd of homeless men in order to get them all rooms just for the night, and when Hurstwood and many of the same homeless and poor are gathered at the Bakers door at midnight, you can see that there is trouble in the city and it is growing, and like a cancer it does grow and spread.
All of this shows that the working class is hardly represented in the book, at least in a positive way, and definitely does not show them in an upwardly mobile light. When you read the novel the poor remain poor and even the middle class, Hurstwood, live in a tentative comfort. There is something uneasy about their position and if they do not watch how they are treating the money they earn, those around them, or their betters, their comfortable lives can easily slip away from them and in the case of Hurstwood without youth on his side he easily succumbs to despair, depression and eventually suicide becomes a promising escape.
Another of my disagreements with the article is when the author states that “One may not always accept his philosophy fully and without reserve, but he himself believes in it” (288). This cannot be further from the truth in my opinion. Although Dreiser is putting this work to pen honestly and without apology, he does not believe in the philosophy of their actions. You can easily read throughout the text that he is uncomfortable with the actions of Carrie. He often leaves off her actions as just the common flightiness of women, or just the will of women. This leads to an excuse not a reason. He often blames her emotions for her choices, leaving this work as a cautionary tale of people behaving badly, not a model for behavior of civilized people. Further evidence of the author's uneasy dealings with the philosophical nature of the text in the duel endings, one ending being a completion of the story.
Prior to the death of Hurstwood there is a quick look into the current state of all the characters that the author chose to follow in detail. A quick look into Hurstwood’s family now that he is gone, how his wife continued the game of society and married her daughter to a wealthy man that will continue to supply her daughter, and herself in tow, with a manner of life that they desire. We are shown Drouet, still the carefree man that he was throughout the book. We are shown Carrie in her lavish apartment with Lola having achieved her goal of material. Then we are given the death of Hurstwood, a completion to the tale. But, under pressure of others the author continues in order to show a redemption for Carrie, in essence his own sister. This does not show a whole hearted belief in the philosophy of the work.
To conclude, the novel Sister Carrie was realistic to a point that makes the reader a little uncomfortable, it can touch a person’s memories and bring perspective to the time of its writing and to the growing problems that come about just years after its writing and the reflection to reality is strong and unyielding. It is a great work, though it must be handled with care to the reality of the material. This is a cautionary tale, not a hero’s journey. This is a lesson in behaving badly and sadly only one character is rewarded their karmic justice for their selfish actions.
Words: 1479

Bibliography:

Dreiser, Theodore. Sister Carrie. [Philadelphia, Pa.]: University of Pennsylvania, 1981. Print.

Coates, Joseph H. ""Sister Carrie." A Novel by Theodore Dreiser Review By: Joseph Hornor Coates." The North American Review 186.623 (1907): 288-91. JSTOR. Web. 18 Mar. 2013. <http://www.jstor.org/stable/25106012>.


MARCH 21, 2013 @ 01:26 PM | 10 COMMENTS


Whelp. That was quick. 20 year old I was nailing gave me my walking papers. Meh. I saw it coming from the get go. Easy come easy go.

In other news.

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I got nothin'.

LOL
MARCH 13, 2013 @ 07:40 AM | 7 COMMENTS


And a third.

So I got a chance to check out a google self driving car up close. Spoke to one of the engineers about it. I was embarrassed, I thought it was a google maps car until I was corrected. They look similar but not close enough to be thought to be the same. frown

Anyway, that fucking thing is pretty cool! It has a 64 laser matrix on the roof of the vehicle that is constantly streaming data about its surroundings. They haven't done much in city testing, which I figured would have been a safer environment, but are constantly allowing it to pilot itself on the freeway. After thinking about it, though the freeway may move faster it does have less turns, less [no] pedestrians and would be a good place to test the vehicles reaction times.

Anyway, it was pretty freaking neat!
MARCH 12, 2013 @ 03:50 PM | 5 COMMENTS


I had a lot of fun with the first one... figured I would try a second.

[edit: And a third.]
MARCH 11, 2013 @ 04:27 PM | 6 COMMENTS


I have an obnoxious teacher that has been sending us Google Doc quizzes for tests...

So I made one for my Silliness Crowd!

I think I will make a few of these. They seem fun. wink

[edit: added three more questions]

[edit: All day this song was in my head.]
MARCH 5, 2013 @ 06:21 PM | 7 COMMENTS


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Just how we roll at the Market. smile
MARCH 4, 2013 @ 02:34 PM | 6 COMMENTS


Back to everything coming up Ray.

So I found a girl from my Math class last year living up the street a couple months ago. She was ultra friendly and cute. But... her Grandparents had just died. That is why she moved in up the street.

I have been chit chatting with her over the last few weeks here and there and we hooked up.

Not sure where this is going to end up leading but for now I am enjoying it. smile



This is her playing a bit back in 2011.

Also... we hooked up on her birthday... she turned 20... DON'T JUDGE ME! tongue
MARCH 2, 2013 @ 12:11 AM | 9 COMMENTS


Boss told me today. I am not yet in the system for pay roll. He offered to cut me a check for my hours. I told him to just toss them on the next check. Everyone there was floored. I quickly told them all, "I'm independently wealthy. I just come here so you can entertain me." I got two people asking me for loans. biggrin
FEBRUARY 28, 2013 @ 02:08 PM | 8 COMMENTS


So. Yes. Have a job. But apparently when I told them part time and gave them the options between Tuesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday or Sunday... they took that as like... a challenge to try and use as many as possible. Had me on four day this week. I just send an email to the gal that hired me. Informed her, three days is like my Max. Falling behind in Japanese.... didn't even think that was possible. Anyway need to get Tuesday or Thursday off to study. Was really under the impression Friday, Saturday and Sunday were the days I was going to be working. Anyway.

Got my teefury grab bag. Two shirts I'm not keeping and I am happy about. biggrin

The other shirts I am keeping.
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FEBRUARY 25, 2013 @ 08:08 AM | 8 COMMENTS


So Friday night I am walking up to the house coming home from work. I see a silver jeep parked out front. It's just sitting their idling. I get about 15 feet from the jeep and the chick inside floors it and charges at me. I leap spin out of the way and kick the door in the process. All this while screaming out "the fuck is wrong with you?" She continued through the stop sign and barreled through the park, never stopping to even say fuck you.

My hip was tweak Saturday, but fuck it. Really no harm done. Just wondering who the hell that was.

Far as work.

The job is pretty fun. The people there are enjoying my company. Apparently I am funny. biggrin
The manager keeps asking "Who did you kill in Southern California? What are you running from?" After he found out I did security for some reason. So now I follow with, "well if only I can stop murdering people long enough to do ______." whenever I am asked to take on a new task. This seems to tickle everyone around me. I tell them "its a hard habit to break. Like trying to give up smoking."

They let me graze there while packaging things. Also more fun! I have been trying out some FANCY ass cheeses! Shit that's like $20+ a pound. Sometimes feel like I need a tux and monocle. I do jut out the pinkie when I get a hold of something particularly expensive. Also, lots of fancy chocolates and strange veggies that I have no experience with.

Getting out of the house is also a bonus and so far work hasn't interfered with my D&D gaming on Saturdays! The Aunt and Uncle seem mixed about me being out of the house so much of the week now though. Not sure if they are going to be getting better or worse with it as the weeks pass.

Had a nerd argument on Saturday.... one I lost.
Okay, this D&D group is a bunch of college classmates from English. The DM is a chick from my English class, her boyfriend is a player. Two of the other players are classmates a dude and his boyfriend and a chick and her husband. The chick and husband thought they were the oldest ones there. She's 27 and he's 32. So. He busts out with a Simpsons reference, not even sure WHAT the reference was now, but then someone starts saying something like, "The Simpsons have been on for like eons". Okay. So I nod and say yeah since like 85. [I now know I am wrong here.] The dude then corrects me with, "No man. They've been on the air since 89." Wounded I try to salvage a minor bit of pride here and retort with, "Well I was thinking about the shorts on the Tracee Ullman show. That was a bit earlier that 89."

He and I back and forth about that for a few more minutes now with the argument that the Ullman show doesn't could as the Simpons because it wasn't there show. THEN he starts in about how "The Spirit of Christmas" is not the beginning of South Park! Which I completely disagree on.

The look of confusion from the others at the table. . . 18-21 year olds. . . was enough for us both to realize we had carbon dated ourselves and both look like a couple of old ass nerds even to these young nerds. At that point we both dropped it.

Moral of the story? I was wrong. I hate being wrong. tongue

Also, I renewed my SG account. wink
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