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JULY 14, 2005 @ 12:23 PM


dusty corner 7-14-05

shrunken candles in the dusty corner
of my room, isolated
and forgotten.
some are contorted
like scraggly fingers,
or like dying roots,
curling and withering
and fighting
to save themselves.
crumpled carcasses in the dark.

i feel like those candles,
gasping, aching
to feel more alive,
to feel light revive my dead
fingers
and arouse the blood
that once reddened my lips.

i’m not sure that i know myself
anymore.
i feel blank, without breath,
groping blindly at the air,
trying desperately to hold on
to something real.
when did i become so shrunken?
so contorted,
like those candles?

my roots are dying.
i can feel them curling and withering,
struggling for breath,
for peace of mind.
where is escape in this dusty
corner?
only those candles know the answer,
shrunken as they are
and strangled of life,
as insignificant as a cough
in the night,
and just as easily forgotten.



**Comments always welcome.
Comments
likwid_todd

likwid_todd

San Diego, CA
December 2002

JUL 14, 2005 07:56 PM

well done.

ARRR!!!

hellSforHeroes

hellSforHeroes

Minneapolis, MN
November 2004

JUL 15, 2005 08:29 AM

I figured no one ever says no to random gifts of poetry....so have a genius tidbit of elsewhere neo-erstwhile nostalgia

Miracle Ice Cream
Adrienne Rich


Miracle's truck comes down the little avenue,
Scott Joplin ragtime strewn behind it like pearls,
and, yes, you can feel happy
with one piece of your heart.

Take what's still given: in a room's rich shadow
a woman's breasts swinging lightly as she bends.
Early now the pearl of dusk dissolves.
Late, you sit weighing the evening news,
fast-food miracles, ghostly revolutions,
the rest of your heart.

pr0ject605

pr0ject605

Pittsburgh, PA
February 2003

JUL 15, 2005 02:51 PM

Holy hell you're yummy!

I mean... umm, hi! How you doin? blush

Scheisskopf

Scheisskopf

Algeria
February 2005

JUL 15, 2005 03:01 PM

Yeah, me too. Being the streetcreeper like I can have fun pretty much anywhere I go. Glad you had fun.

Nice entry. Rage against the dying of the light. You certainly still have your mind and good looks to boot.

Innocence is good. Stay gold, Pony Boy.






[Edited on Jul 15, 2005 4:10PM]

abstract_sound

abstract_sound

Arlington, TX
April 2004

JUL 16, 2005 03:55 AM

livelaughlove ~

thank you for your kind words regarding my portfolio.

i found your poetic works to be absolutely splendid and encourage you to continue writing, as you truly have a way with words.


sincerely yours

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