Hey pretty girl. I cant wait for your set. I just realized were not far from eachother

great body. delicious.
that's my feedback.

Delicious! And right in my back yard too! I'll wave on my way to Melbouring tomorrow! haha!

ur funny! good energy in ur pics!

For feedback, start a thread in the SG Hopefuls group. You'll get an earful - all the stuff people are too polite to say until you ask for it.

Since you've asked, here's my two cents, to be taken with a grain of salt, as all penny pairs should be:

First, getting the good stuff out of the way: My goodness you're adorable. And I love the playful look of this set. Your facial expressions are anything but static or boring.

The photography and lighting doesn't suck. Some problems are still dealbreakers here: We've got too many shots that are almost full body but with bad composition that clips off bits of you. You've got a good mix of "objectifying" shots that zoom in on specific pretty bits of you, thrown in together with personality shots that include your face, but the mix is clumpy. We get three of nearly the same shot in a row. Two should be dropped. I'd say you tog's work was shy of site expectations, but it's remarkably better than most first sets we see.

That being said, let me say why I'd guess you've got less than a 1% chance of this set being picked up, all the same. In one word, it's consistency. Specifically, a lack thereof. You've got three different backdrops, with sudden jumps between them and no sense of narrative for the set, despite a title and description that suggests there should be one.

Most SG sets don't go so far as having a storyline, but they do have consistent temporal flow. Clothes go from on to off, or rarely from off to on, but they don't just blip back on in the middle of a set, along with a change of scenery. This makes it look like you took three sets, none of which was quite enough. And what you really need is one great set at a time.

For an example of an classic SG set on a similar theme, check out Flux's Housework. Note the sense of time as you go from picture to picture: It's not just a few dozen hot images, but a continuous scene that happens to be made up of hot and playful images.

A few more points: Despite some notes in the FAQ that really need to be updated, staff almost never edits sets submitted for member review. It's up to you to trim the set down to the finished version, picking the images that you think are best and best represent you. 80's way more than you need.

OK, that's enough time writing. I hope this is useful to you, and I hope we see more of you around. If you really want more critique with the "you need to fix this" not spared, introduce your set in the SG Hopeful's Group. You'll find plenty of hard words and encouragement alike there.

It was an excellent set. Tons of fun (expressions), great beautiful smile, and lots of color. You also pose really well. Great work!

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Also.. if the lady wants to post 200 pictures I say let her!

Let those pictures be seen!!!

Because there are no standards for what kind of pictures need to be in a set (objectifying or otherwise), it's all opinion. Whatever the model is comfortable with sharing goes.

Awesome set.
Hope you have a great week soon!

I quite liked your set. You are lovely!

so how was your feedback my love?.....great I hope.